The Stalker From the Past

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -Treasure-, Oct 19, 2012.

  1. 0.0 UPDATE!  tristan is the showfur
     
  2. Update! okay so it's short but I'll probably be updating all day! I wrote so much last night I just can't help it!
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    In a dim light room there was Allan with a chair with someone sitting in it and someone hung against the wall. Where Angi was Standing near Allan with crossed arms and a smirk on her face and said, "Thought I was a friend? Your wrong..."

    My alarm suddenly goes off and I wake up. I turned off my alarm with a lazy hand throw. I sat up half asleep, swung my legs off the side of my bed and looked at the alarm clock. It read, "6:45am Monday, Monday."

    I shrugged and stood to my feet and went to the bathroom. I brushed my teeth and left my room to go wake up Kristen. She was gone...I had just realizeded I left her with our Grandmother to keep her safe. So I turned and went to the guest room which is now Elizabeth's room and she's sitting on her bed reading and dressed.
    "Hello Grace! Good morning!" she said happily. I replied with, "Yup, good morning!"

    I walked back to my room and lazily threw on light washed skinny jeans, A Blue T-Shirt, and vans. I then brushed my long light brown hair and slipped on my jacket.

    I headed to the stairs when I passed by Liz's Room, "let's go!" it was 7:15am when we need to get to the school by 7:30am.

    When I saw the front door swing open violently...
     
  3. I like chicken
     
  4. OKAY! Last update til tonight! I keep updating to fast! So here 
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    In the door way stood Allan. He had a knife in one of his hands. He barged up the stairs and knocked me to the floor. I felt my self fall back wards in slow motion and hit the floor getting angry. He angrily yelled, "WHERE'S ELIZABETH?!"
    I got up and shoved him down the stairs. "NONE OF YOUR BEE'S WAX! NOW LEAVE OR IM CALLING THE COPS!" I snapped at him. I pulled out my phone ready to call the cops.

    He got up. "This is NOT over!" He exlcaimed before he left.

    Liz came running out. "What was that?" she asked
    "Allan" I rolled my eyes. Even saying his name disgusts me.
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    We left and drove to school. In the parking lot was May and Karl. A couple for 3 months but already in love.

    Me and Liz stood there watching May and Karl tell each other how much they loved each other. They kissed and I said, "Ahem, Earth to the love Birds!"
    They quickly looked at me and let go of each other. Liz elbowed me and whispered, "Rude much?" I ignored her.
    We walked into the school and saw a guy at the front desk harassing the Lady. Allan...at our school? Really?
     
  5. I like that part about may 
     
  6. Lol!!  wait til later to see what happens! I already know but y'all don't!  I have so many updates! I could be done writing my story soon! thats not good...I'll stop writing for the day JK I CAN'T I LOVE IT
     
  7. xD thanks for breaking up our moment lexi! i was getting into it 
     
  8. UPDATED!ENJOY MY LITTLE READERS
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    Me and Liz rushed past the front desk and to our lockers. When Tristan popped up behind me and hugged me from behind. He scared me! "Hey baby.." he said as he kissed my cheek. "hey!" I said smiling.

    He left off down the hall way when the bell rang. Everyone scattered out of the hallway and just a few seconds it was me and Liz left Along with papers.

    Liz and I collected our books and started making our way to 1st period when we see Allan In the halls yelling at a teacher. We quickly went into Mr. Tuccairones class.

    We were careful all day trying not to be seen by Allan.
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    It's 4th period lunch when Liz and I are eatting lunch with May,Karl, and Tristan. May and Karl, as usual were all kissy face and Tristan was eatting pretty fast...he eats a lot but manages to stay fit. When some kid Rudely interrupted lunch and stood on a table.
    Why can't Allan just give up!
    He said loudly, "Where is Elizabeth Noelle?"

    May and Karl stopped kissing when
    All the kids in the lunch room turned and pointed at Liz...
     
  9. 0.0 no no no
     
  10. Updated AGAIN!!  sorry I love my story
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    I was shocked. I let the plastic fork fall out of my hand when I quickly grabbed my purse putting it on me. "Liz..." I said
    "Yeah?" she replied
    "Run..."

    We bolted out of the lunch room hearing Allan race after us. We made it out of the school when I tripped on a rock and fell face first. I looked back and saw Allan ganging on us. "GRACE! Come on!" she exclaimed pulling my arm.
    I stumbled and got up, running to towards to the car.

    We both got in the car when Allan stuck his foot in the passenger side door where I was. I kicked his foot out and slammed the door without noticing his finger getting broken off.

    We made it out of the school campus and got on the highway. I searched my pockets and my purse but I couldn't find it. I couldn't find my phone... I looked at Liz in shock. "I dropped my phone when I tripped!" I said
    "Oh no! Don't worry we'll stop by Verizon!" She replied.

    I calmed down and before I knew it I was asleep...
     
  11. OH NO WELL STOP BY VERIZON
     
  12. IKR!! WHY U GONNA STOP BY VERIZON?! DONT LIZ GOT A PHONE??
     
  13. YEA BUT GRACE NEEDS ONE TO HAVE A CONVOS WITH TRISTAN IN PRIVATE 
     
  14. I updated  below! I updated!?!? indeed I did!! Check It out 
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    Liz reached over and woke me up. "come on we're here!" We were at a hotel some where in Virginia. We have driven all the way from Charlotte, North Carolina. It was now 6:32pm.

    I got out of the car and went to the back of the car. Liz handed me the bag of food we had gathered yesterday and a bag of my clothes that I always kept in the car. Along with her clothes. We carried it in.

    I flopped onto the bed face first. "ugh, why can't he just give up on you?!" I muttered. "I don't know, but he needs too!!" she answered me. I
    Sighed and got up. I went over to the kitchen area in the motel room and grabbed an apple. I ate it.

    Someone knocked on the door and I jumped. "Grace relax, I called over May, Karl, and Tristan!"

    They came in and we told them what had happend.

    "No! This can't be true!" Karl said as he chuckled
    "Karl! This is serious!" May slapped Karl's arm and shot him a look
    "umm babe...I'm happy to help!" said Tristan. Karl and may nodded in agreement to what Tristan said.

    I got tired and feel asleep while they were talking...I need the sleep...I'm stressed out over keeping Liz safe.
     
  15. BUMMPITY BUMP BUMP
     
  16. UPDATE
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    I was woken up by a car door being slammed shut. I sat up and looked around the motel room. Liz was taking a shower. I got up carefully and went over to the window. I looked out side and it was just my Grandmother. I opened the door.
    "Here! Take this little brat!" she ordered as she gave me Kristen's hand. I took here and brought her inside.
    "What did she do?" I asked. I was curious.
    "She Wouldn't stop making a mess!"
    She replied. She was obviously frustrated with Kristen.

    I closed the door and my grandmother drove off. Liz came out of the bathroom dressed in jeans and band t-shirt.
    "Hey Kris!" she said.
    "Hi." Kristen replied in a grumpy tone.
    "Something's wrong with Kris." I whispered into Liz's ear.

    Little did we know...my sister...was a cold blooded killer...