The School (Da Story continuation)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by SVG-TheFaLLenFenrir-, Jul 14, 2012.

  1. ,_, sorry for not updating in a while, hoping to get next update tommorow.
     
  2. .-. Bumping so I won't have to search through 3 pages to find it.
     
  3. Don't write in role play form. Use quotation marks, and don't put stars around actions. This is a story.
     
  4. Leave him alone. He works hard on this.

    Can't you see? A lot of people haven't complained.

    And then YOU show up.

    Really?
     
  5. I'm bumping to first page again
     
  6. Wow... she is bashing here too...
     
  7. Hmm, I love how you claim to know everything. "It's a story" lulz... Here is what it is:

    Role-Play and a story had a baby, and this is it. :|

    If the majority want me to do quotation marks and no *s, then I will.
     
  8. -Curacao Blue-

    Mike: Uhhh

    Mr Chair: Now! You are going to go to that academy, and with this new-found powers of yours, you can easily ace your classes. After the school year, we destroy the academy.

    Mike: My eyes! They burn!

    Mr Chair: devil's eyes? only had 1 man that survived, and I could barely kill him.

    Mike: Let me go!

    Mr Chair: No...

    -Unknown Infinity-

    Panda: Come with me Logan.

    Logan: *follows panda*

    Panda: I don't know how you managed to win, but to obtain the power, i'll have to put a tatoo of a star somewhere on your body. The bigger the star, the stronger your powers increase, but it'll hurt more also.

    Logan: Put it on my back.

    Panda: *Grabs huge needle* *sticks logan in the back*

    Logan: So what happenes to my body?

    Panda: You'll grow 3 inches taller, and your muscle size and strength will increase by 500%.

    Logan: Will I go crazy?

    Panda: I don't know. We've only had 1 that went crazy.

    Logan: Who?

    Panda: Mr Chair...

    -Echelon-

    Buddy: Well, i'm going to study.

    Gonzo: We've got a huge selection of books, i'm sure you'll gain more knowledge here.

    Buddy: So... What if I just skip The academy classes?

    Gonzo: since you passed the test, all you have to do is do 1 club mission a day.

    Buddy: Ok. I'll drop out of the academy then.

    -Sex Bob-Omb-

    Hermes: The only person who knew 5 was casp. Congrats!

    Casp: So what do I get?

    Hermes: Well, you're part of the noble 4 of your year. They get special privileges.

    ---

    As always keep it snazzy.
     
  9. This one was shorter
     
  10. Well, I want him to get better at writing. Don't get all mad at me for saying advice. A good writer WANTS criticism, because they know that's the only way to get better at writing.
     
  11. I know johny, I was wanting to get an update done quick, i'll have a longer one tommorow to even it out.
     
  12. I want criticizim, yes. But I don't want people demanding things, and calling it criticizm.
     
  13. Idk if it's with a z or s
     
  14. I'm sorry. I had bad wording:(
     
  15. Though ur small storys help to not get me confused
     
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    (_Y_.)' ._ ) `._ `. ``-..-'
    _..`--'_..-_/ /--'_.' .'
    (il).-'' ((i).' ((!.-'


    Does that work?
     
  17. (Side note, a "dash" in this story is like moving so fast, it's almost like teleporting)


    *The next day*

    Mike: I feel... Like i'm not even in control of my actions...

    Mr Chair: Hehehe... Go to school, and blow shit up.

    Mike: Errmm... Ok...

    *Mike arrives late to class*

    Andy: Mike, you're late. 3 page report on why you were late at the end of class.

    Mike: *A demon-like grin appears on his face* and if I don't?

    Andy: You could be expelled. No clans would accept you either. Except for Curacao, but you didn't go to that clan.

    Nina: Yes he did...

    Andy: Leave this class Mike. You're are not welcome.

    Mike: Don't tell me what to do you fool. *Eyes turn solid red*

    Andy: Berk!!! Danzo!!! Vixen!!! Sophie!!! Jim!!! Help!!

    Danzo: What is it? *Glances at mike's eyes* *Body has a tint of red in it* *becomes paralyzed*

    Mike: *Dashes over to danzo* *knife of energy forms in his hand*

    Danzo: *Gets stabbed in the back, red tint gets absorbed into the knife, is loosing blood quickly*

    Mike: *energy knife becomes energy kantana*

    Danzo: Logan!

    Mike: Shut it noob! *dashes over to vixen*

    vixen: You better leave you asshole! *head gets cut off by energy kantana*

    mike: oh shit! Ya heads gone!

    PHANT: You son of a bitch... *points hand at mike* ... *hundreds of snowballs come flying out*

    Mike: Please... *As soon as the snowball touches mike, it melts*

    Berk: *dashes over to mike* *grabs mike by the neck* *throws mike out the window*

    Logan: let me settle this, I want to test this technique.

    Berk: If you say so...

    Logan: *jumps out of the window*

    Mike: hahahahaha... The new kid wants to fight me... *dashes behind logan* peek-a-boo! *swings kantana at logan*

    Logan: *catches kantana with his bear hands* Gahh! *grabs kantana out of mike's hands* *clenches fist around the handle*

    *Kantana breaks into a thousand pieces*

    Logan: *Absorbs the kantana pieces energy*

    Mike: *starts beating the crap out of logan with his fists and feet, pushing him back into a forest*

    Logan: *purple aura begins flowing around him* *purple spear forms in his hands*

    Mike: *red sword appears in his hands*

    *both mike and logan dash at the middle of the battlefield*

    *sword and spear clash*

    *purple and red energy go everywhere, destroying the forest, until it's just dirt and tree remainings*

    Mr Chair: your lucky I saved your ass, you almost died.

    ---

    Kind of a cliff hanger!

    

    Keep it snazzy!
     
  18. New Characters:

    Kandy:
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    Osun:
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    Danzo: Go get... Logan...

    Berk: Sure! And where the hell is jim?

    Jim: I was in the middle of a movie with my students...

    Berk: Son of a bitch... You go get logan, i'm going to take danzo to the nurse. *heads to the nurse's office*

    Kandy: yes?

    Berk: Danzo was badly injured, can you heal him?

    Kandy: Sure *hand glows orange* ... *Slaps danzo across the face*

    Danzo: Ouch! What was that for?

    Kandy: For almost dying!

    -Jim's mini-adventure-

    Jim: I hope that brat is still alive... Danzo would be pissed if he died.

    Logan: Gahh... Help me dammit!

    Jim: *snaps fingers*

    *Jim puts logan in an illsuion*

    Logan: woahh! Why am I in a boxing arena?

    Osun: *a bird made of fire appears in his hand*

    *bird flies straight into Logan's chest*

    Logan: i'm too tired to fight back... I'll get you one day for sure though...

    Osun: My name is Osun...

    *Jim undoes illusion*

    Logan: What'd you do to me?!?

    Jim: Put you to sleep, ya brat! We're like a mile away from the academy.

    -Mr Chair and Mike's side/POV-

    Mike: How do I obtain more power?!?

    Mr Chair: The only way is to train, or kill Satin, but if you kill satin, you'll have 15 minutes and then everything in hell will turn to ice.

    Mike: Sounds easy enough... Will I obtain more demon parts?

    Mr Chair: Geez you have no common sense, when and if you kill him, you'll obtain EVERY demon part.

    Mike: I've already got two, and I feel so strong... I wonder what a full demon body will feel like.

    Mr Chair: T-TWO?!?

    Mike: Eyes and arm... *A big red arm much more muscular and longer than his other replaces his right arm*

    Mr Chair: What does it do then?!?

    Mike: Absorbs anyone i've killed energy...

    Mr Chair: You'll be one nasty mothafucka to deal with if you kill satin...

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    Interesting... e.e Jim was slackin' off watchin' a movie?!? That bastard!!

    Keep it snazzy.