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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Simply_Fox (01), Oct 2, 2011.
(No one even noticed i was mising )
-I gently return it-
I walk and get bridgets stuff and walk back-
-I pull away and smile- (I did)
-I smile- "Love you."
Thanks
Love you to. I think I might go walking...
"Alright. I'll come with you."
-I felt a sudden movement and something grabbed me from behind. i let out an ear piercing scream-
I sit next to Bridget and cover us up putting arm around her- better?
-I hear the scream and run the direction it came from-
-I smile- yea
-I hear lindsay and start sprinting-
I hold Bridget close- good
I jump up- what was that?
"AH! Let me go dad!" -I kick and struggle to get away from the knife-
-I take out my survival knife- "Lindsay!!?"
-I see a large man attacking Lindsay. I slip behind him with my gun-
I pull out my knife and look around- Bridget plz stay right here
It sounded like lindsey