the rope

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by LelouchViBritannia-rebellion, May 7, 2014.

  1. I guess this is poetry. I don't see why it only has to be depressing poetry though.
     
  2. I'm sad im stood at the bus stop in the rain,









    I should write a poem about it :(
     
  3. It's only sad because I'm better at writing sad
     
  4. There I was
    Alone,
    In a jar,
    Gazing
    At the monstrous fingers
    Above my head.
    I couldn't move,
    I couldn't break free,
    I was next
    To die.
    I became cold,
    As the air touched my body,
    And his lips touched my back.
    I knew this was my final goodbye.
    As he took the crunch,
    I weeped
    And released my pickle juices.
    His lips scrunched,
    As I was sour,
    And he hated Dill.
     
  5. Much wow.
    Such Pickles.
    Very poetry.
    So amaze. 
     
  6. so much color
     
  7. Only poems I can do are depressing and if anything else, I can't do any other type of poem
     
  8. My poem is the best. Amirite?
     
  9. LOLOLOPOLLMAOLMAOLMAOROFLROFLRFOL
    URRITEURRITEURITELOLOLOLOLOL........

    <3
     
  10. ....honestly I'm done anyways, no one really cares or wants to talk to me anywhere, in the end, I can't vent or escape here
     
  11. Jacob, did you like my poem?
     
  12. I always critique yours. Do mine.
     
  13. I didn't really like the poem
     
  14. I loved it pickles  it was beautiful  now do one on the whole life cycle of a pickle 
     
  15. Thanks Jacob, appreciate it buddy
     
  16. Thanks rainbow <3
     
  17. Sorry if it seems critical for me to say, but in don't like it...
     
  18. TERROR.IS.BACK.BABY