The Perfect Two

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HollyS, Dec 10, 2011.

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  1. That's better, I just wanted some back story. I never said your story was bad, or didn't like it, I simply pointed out things I saw. I'm sorry I publicly humiliated you, but a critique is what makes you a stronger writer. I simply wanted to be helpful, and in no ways wanted to offend or hurt you. I'm very sorry, and will continue to read quietly.
     
    #1281 Qinny, Dec 30, 2011
  2. Well if you would have waited instead of humiliate me then you would have gotten your back story. Next time you want to critique my writing just friend me so it can be talked about privately.
     
    #1282 HollyS, Dec 30, 2011
  3. WOOF WOOF WOOF (people are disagreeing )
     
    #1283 *JamesNovember (01), Dec 30, 2011
  4. his bark is worse then his bite.
     
    #1284 Qinny, Dec 30, 2011
  5. Haha good boy James heres a treat
     
    #1285 HollyS, Dec 30, 2011
  6. You've obviously never felt my bite
     
    #1286 *JamesNovember (01), Dec 30, 2011
  7. Now now James. Heel boy lol
     
    #1287 HollyS, Dec 30, 2011
  8. Grrrrrrrr finr
     
    #1288 *JamesNovember (01), Dec 30, 2011
  9. Good boy  theres your treats
     
    #1289 HollyS, Dec 30, 2011
  10. OMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOM
     
    #1290 *JamesNovember (01), Dec 30, 2011
  11. Lol James you're crazy lol
     
    #1291 HollyS, Dec 30, 2011
  12. You're making him fat,Holly. 
     
    #1292 *TiffanyOdair (01), Dec 30, 2011
  13. Oh god fat attack dog intruder! Oh well I'm to fat to help
     
    #1293 *JamesNovember (01), Dec 30, 2011
  14. 
     
    #1294 *TiffanyOdair (01), Dec 30, 2011
  15. No wait I'll sit on him 
     
    #1295 *JamesNovember (01), Dec 30, 2011
  16. Oh no we can't have a fat attack dog lol here have this
     
    #1296 HollyS, Dec 30, 2011
  17. 
     
    #1297 *TiffanyOdair (01), Dec 30, 2011
  18. Lol oh I'm tired. I'll write more tomorrow.
    James you are now going on a strict diet. Certain people will feed you throughout the day when I can't but you shall do your job lol
     
    #1298 HollyS, Dec 30, 2011
  19. SHHHH I is sleeping
     
    #1299 *JamesNovember (01), Dec 30, 2011
  20. Tsk tsk. I might need 2 attack dogs instead of 1 lol
     
    #1300 HollyS, Dec 30, 2011
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