Zack's point of view: I was bored. I couldn't do anything. At all. I text almost everybody in my phone but they were all busy. I sighed,"Sh*t." I shut my eyes and just thought. I love Holly and I want her to be happy. But there are two other guys who love her to and want her to be happy to. I want her just like they want her but I don't want to ruin anything between us. I want to keep whatever is between us safe. I decided to text Holly and see if she could come over. She said yes which made me happy. I grabbed the crutches that I had beside my bed and tried getting up for a bit. I mumbled to myself,"This stuff is fu*king sh*t." A few minutes later I heard Holly pull up and I tried my best to get to the door and open it for her. She beat me to it. When she opened the door I almost fell and busted my as* again. She grabbed me before I did and steadied me. I smiled sheepishly and said,"Sorry I'm not used to this yet." She laughed and helped me to the couch where we just sat and talked and after a couple of hours she had to leave and I got up and followed her out to her car on my crutches and hugged her and said,"No matter who you choose I'll always be there for you."
How is this a story? You should work on your grammar. Why is it written like the person is writing a diary? Why so much profane language?
Lol yes yes you are James lol but I'm not gonna listen to someone be an as* about my story if they don't like it I'm not making them read it.
Holly's point of view: Being with Zack felt different. Not a good different either. It seemed like everything between us was gone and in Its place was just friendship and nothing more. I decided to go to Dylan's maybe he would help me with this whole stupid thing. I arrive at Dylan's house and get out and I see Dylan sitting in the back of his truck. I smile and laugh a little and say,"Hey DR. B." He looked up and smiled,"Hey whats up?" I sit beside him on his truck,"Nothing. I decided to come see my best friend. I was at Zack's but it was kinda awkward. Kinda like he didn't want to try and be with me anymore." Dylan sat in thought for a minute and finally said,"Well maybe he just wants what's best for you. Maybe he thinks that he isn't the best thing for you and that someone else is." I looked at Dylan and I could feel tears start coming to my eyes but they never fell. Maybe this was the best thing..