The Perfect Two

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HollyS, Dec 10, 2011.

  1. *stays silent*
    LOL jk,I'm not on any team 
     
  2. What about team ZACH
     
  3. Nope,'cuz he and Dylan hurt her. Then James and Josh tried to snatch her. So I'm not on any team 'cuz they're all in the wrong 
     
  4. Who said I tried to snatch her?
     
  5. The author did  you fell in love with her,and you want her. So you're trying to snatch her 
     
  6. I'm gone for two hours and y'all are fighting over who's in the right lol
     
  7. LOL...not fighting...debating 
    I have skills,ya know? 
     
  8. Btw I'm team James and Zack right now lol
     
  9. ...well James is better than Josh...so yeah my team is Team Holly 
     
  10. Lol James is starting to fall for her and Josh wants her to prove a point and Zack is always gonna want her bc he loves her and he wants her and him to be a family and Dylan still waiting for him lol
     
  11. Holly's point of view:

    I let Zack in because I knew that if I didn't then he would stay out there.

    Zack looked at me and sat on the floor and said,"Holly I really am sorry for everything. If there was something I could do to take everything back I would."

    I sigh and sit down beside him,"Well Zack you can't. We have a baby on the way and I'm trying to avoid you like thats gonna make it better but it's making it worse."

    Zack put his arm around me and hugged me like a friend would and said,"How about we just start over as friends."

    I look at Zack and say,"That'd be nice Zack. Oh. Do you know if James was at school today."

    Zack looked at me and said,"I wasn't at school today but one of my friends told me he's in the hospital."

    I look at Zack scared and say,"Drive me there."
     
  12. bump! 



     
  13. I will update tomorrow morning.
     
  14. Bump!!!! Hahahha yeah Go team James!!!
     
  15. Bump!! And haha team james
     
  16. Zack's point of view:

    I didn't go to school today. Mainly because I didn't want to. And because I was starting to get sick.

    Then I got a text message from my friend Dyron:Zack man James just got his as* whipped.

    After I read that I had to go see if Holly was home and see if she knew. I'm not a bad guy I just didn't make smart choices. Like the fact that I didn't use protection with Holly and now she's gonna have my baby but you know what I'm actually ready for this baby to come. I'm ready to be a father.

    I got in my truck and drove to Holly's house. When I got there I went to her window and knocked on it.

    She came to the window and she still looked beautiful to me.
     
  17. uhh bump! 


     
  18. Zack's point of view:

    After Holly and I talked for 30 minutes she asked me,"Is James at school today?"

    I couldn't lie to her no matter how much I wanted to tell her that he wasn't. I said,"I wasn't at school today but one of my friends told me he's in the hospital."

    She looked at me with a scared look in her eyes that I hated to see and said,"Drive me there."

    We drove in silence. Mainly because she was scared for James and because we didn't have anything to talk about.

    I drove faster. That's all I could do was drive faster. Thank God there weren't any cops on the road today.

    We got to the hospital in 10 minutes. A new personal best for me driving from her house but that's not important.

    We got into the hospital and I went to the nurses station and said,"Where's James Cobalt's room?"

    The nurse looked at me and pointed to where it was and I said,"Ok. Thanks."

    I took Holly's hand and lead her to James's room and said,"You probably want to go in there alone."

    She looked at me and then at our hands and then at James's door and then back at me and said,"I don't know."