The Perfect Two

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HollyS, Dec 10, 2011.

  1. TRUTHHHH! Then Zack will get mad and then theres another guy who loves her even if shes prego and then Zack get jelazz!

    Loljk, it's your story. 
     
  2. Haha we will see tomorrow what she does. The writer is tired so she will go to bed lol night guys y'all are awesome. Thank you sooooooooo much for liking my story.
     
  3. Okay sure! Sweet dreamsss  (dream about the next update! Haha)
     
  4. Ok 
    Haha 
     
  5. Alright I will update sometime today. What do y'all think about going into different point of views for this. I'm sure you all wanna know what Dylan, Zack, Hailey, and rest think. Also James and Josh will be introduced in this part let me know what you think about getting different points of view in
     
  6. I stared at Zack for what seemed like the longest time thinking about me and him and us and our new baby.

    The bell ringing to go to 1st broke my thoughts and Zack stood up,"Holly I gotta go I can't be late for 1st. It was good just to be with you though."

    I said the only thing I could to make him stay,"Zack I'm pregnant!"

    Zack turned around his eyes looked shocked,"You're what?!?!"

    I say,"I'm pregnant."

    Zack looks at me,"That's great that means we can get back together. Right?"
     
  7. lol funny!!!!  bump



     
  8. Umm no zack wtf of course not you evil lil b*TCH!
     
  9. Do y'all want me to do different points of view
     
  10. Why do u think zack is evil lol
     
  11. zack is not evil ii like him 


     
  12. Lol so would y'all like to see the different points of view or not lol
     
  13. Won't continue til I know if y'all think it would be interesting for more points of views or not lol so if u want me to continue then speak up lol
     
  14. I THINK YOU SHOULD DO DIFFERENT POINTS OF VEIW NOW UPDATEE!! 
     
  15. Zack's point of view:

    I left Holly's house so fuc*ing pissed at Alaina. What gave her the right to ruin my relationship with Holly.

    I drive to the tennis courts so I can play a couple of rounds to cool off a bit.
    Even that didn't work.

    I walk over to my truck and grab my phone and text Alaina: You are such a fuc*ing bit*h! How dare you call Holly a whore! Why should you even care I broke up with you!!!!!! Holly is the greatest girl I have ever been with!!!! BIT*H JUST LEAVE ME ALONE!!!!!

    I felt better after sending that message to Alaina but now I had to try and win Holly back. The one girl I know I truly love..this is gonna be hard...
     
  16. bump!!!!! 



     
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  18. Zack's point of view:

    It's been a month since Holly broke up with me and I still feel like I've lost everything that I've ever loved.

    My best friend Zach Morrow tries to cheer me up but it never works. The only thing that could cheer me up is having Holly back in my arms..

    I look across the parking lot and see Holly's car. I take a deep breath and think:I got to talk to her now.

    I get out of my truck and walk to her car and tap on her window like I always did. She turned and looked at me and I could see the pain in her eyes.

    I look at her knowing I love her and I say,"Holly please talk to me. I've left you so many messages."

    She gets out of her car without saying a word and takes my hand. I think:Did she forgive me? Does she want to talk about us getting back together?

    We walk to the courtyard and sit down and Holly doesn't say a word. We both look at each other until the bell rings and I slowly get up and say,"Holly I gotta go I can't be late for 1st. It was good just to be with you though."

    I start walking off and Holly finally says,"Zack I'm pregnant!"

    I stop dead in my tracks and turn around to face and slowly start walking back to her in complete shock,"You're what?!?!"

    She looks at me with those beautiful blue eyes full of fear and says,"I'm pregnant."

    I look at her feeling so many different emotions but I knew one thing. I wanted her. I wanted to be with her. Forever.

    I finally say,"Thats great that means we can get back together. Right?"
     
  19. Holly's point of view:

    I stare at Zack completely speechless thinking:is he really serious? Does he really think it's gonna be that easy for him to come back in my life after all this sh*t with Alaina?

    I shake my head at Zack,"No Zack. How can I ever trust you again after this stuff with Alaina?"

    Zack looks at me pleadingly,"Holly please. I love you. I don't love Alaina. I never did. I only care about you and I want to be there for you when you have our baby. Please Holly please."

    I shake my head at Zack again,"No Zack. Honestly I don't think I want you in the baby's life."

    The hurt look on Zack's face did it. I started to cry and said,"I can't do this Zack please just don't talk to me."

    I run away from him, tears streaming down my face.
    Blinded by my own tears and not really knowing where I was going I accidentally bumped into him..
     
  20. BUMP!!!!!!