The Perfect Two

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HollyS, Dec 10, 2011.

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  1. Y'all are very anxious people lol let me know your thoughts on it while I write more of the story
     
    #301 HollyS, Dec 14, 2011
  2. ASAP




    Now!!
     
    #302 *CheekyBunny (01), Dec 14, 2011
  3. It's AMAZING!!!!!!
     
    #303 *_Bridget_ (01), Dec 14, 2011
  4. Bump
     
    #304 *lalag (01), Dec 14, 2011
  5. IKR!!
     
    #305 *CheekyBunny (01), Dec 14, 2011
  6. Bump!!
     
    #306 xxalyssaxx, Dec 14, 2011
  7. Bump



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    Already!
     
    #307 *CheekyBunny (01), Dec 14, 2011
  8. I love this story
     
    #308 *_Bridget_ (01), Dec 14, 2011
  9. Me too


     
    #309 *CheekyBunny (01), Dec 14, 2011
  10. Ah please hurry! I'm dying over here! Lol
     
    #310 -Angel_Cuppcake_97-, Dec 14, 2011
  11. Haha you're wait is somewhat over
     
    #311 HollyS, Dec 14, 2011
  12. I stare at Zack in disbelief,".....you.....love her..?"

    Zack looks at me for a minute trying to figure what I was talking about then he remembered what he said and a sickening feeling came over him,"Holly no! I don't love her! I love you! I don't know what I was thinking Holly. You know I love you. You know I can't be without you baby please."

    I shake my head, tears welling in my eyes,"no Zack. Just get out!"

    Zack looks at me with pain in his eyes,"Are you breaking up with me?"
     
    #312 HollyS, Dec 14, 2011
  13. Bump!!!no talking holly!!just updatrum dying


    Lol
     
    #313 *CheekyBunny (01), Dec 14, 2011
  14. Bump
     
    #314 *lalag (01), Dec 14, 2011
  15. Bump
     
    #315 *CheekyBunny (01), Dec 14, 2011
  16. Well I have to talk for this part lol I need my guy readers to come up with a new guy to make Zack jealous.

    UP FOR THE CHALLENGE!!!
     
    #316 HollyS, Dec 14, 2011
  17. Jake!!!

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    #317 *CheekyBunny (01), Dec 14, 2011
  18. Can ya pick Jake,Jacob,Josh,Ian,Daniel or Dan,Mike,Joseph?
     
    #318 *CheekyBunny (01), Dec 14, 2011
  19. All your guy characters are reallly short. And I've never liked Zack hahaha! Dump him!! Team Dylann 
     
    #319 *tiaavanityyxoxo (01), Dec 14, 2011
  20. How about James Cobalt 6'3 plays various sports with black hair and storm grey eyes NOT a player
     
    #320 *JamesNovember (01), Dec 14, 2011
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