The Perfect Two

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HollyS, Dec 10, 2011.

  1. Thanks. About to update again
     
  2. I make it back to school and get in my car and slam the door and start doing the only thing I can do. Cry. I just knew I had lost Zack forever all because I told him the truth. I was still crying when I heard a knock on my window. I look up and see my two best friends, Dylan and Hailey looking at me worried. I unlock the door and they get in my car.
    Dylan looks at me for a minute and asks,"Do you want to talk about it. You know we are here for you."
    I look at Dylan and Hailey and take a deep breath and told them exactly what I had told Zack and what happened after I told Zack.

    Hailey and Dylan looked at each other and then back at me and they both said,"We know what happened between you and Jerame."

    I stare at them shocked and ask,"How? Nobody was supposed to know!"

    Dylan simply said,"Your mom told us in case you ever had a breakdown so we could be there for you."

    I cry more and Dylan gets out and goes to the driver side and picks me up out of the driver side and puts me in the passenger side and then he gets in the drivers side and cranks the car.

    I look up and ask him,"Where are we going?"

    He looked at me and said,"I'm taking you home."
     
  3. I don't remember us leaving the school and I don't remember us getting to my house but when I woke up I was in my room and it was dark outside. I looked beside me and saw Dylan laying beside me with his arms around me as if he were protecting me. I smiled thinking: this means everything to me. This moment right here.
    I close my eyes and get closer to him.

    I woke up again but this time seemed different. Dylan was no longer beside me. I looked around my room but it didn't look like my room anymore.....or at least the way my room looks now. It looked like my room 3 years ago when I was a freshman.
    I looked around and said,"why am I having this dream again."

    I was awakened by Dylan who was shaking me trying to get me awake.

    I looked up at him and said,"Whats wrong?"

    He looked at me with a worried expression and said,"You were having a bad dream."
    I looked at him then looked around my room and saw that everything was exactly the same.
    I looked at him again and said,"I'm sorry."

    He looked at me then kissed the top of my head and said,"It's fine. I gotta go though. I'll see you at school tomorrow."

    And with that he left leaving me to think about him, Jerame, Cody, and Zack...
     
  4. The next morning I went through my same routine of getting ready for school. Once I arrived at school I sat in my car and thought about Zack and if they would release him from the hospital today or not. I was still deep in thought when someone tapped on my window.
    It was......Zack.
    I couldn't move. I just sat there frozen and stared at him.
    He looked at me his eyes apologetic and I unlocked the door and got out.

    Zack looked at me then down at the ground and said,"I'm sorry for how I acted Holly. I just wish you would have told me."

    I shake my head feeling tears in my eyes,"I couldn't tell anybody. I was too ashamed to tell anybody."

    Zack puts his arms around me,"You never have to be ashamed with me with you. I'll always love you."

    I shake my head,"No, Zack, I can't keep doing this anymore. Everyone's life would be so much better if I were dead."
     
  5. Thanks. I'm working on more of the story. Let me know what you think might happen
     
  6. Is she gonna try to commit suicide? 
     
  7. Idk you'll have to wait and see(;
     
  8. Zack looks at me very worriedly,"Holly what are you talking about?"

    I try to push him away and he grabs me and pulls me closer,"Holly talk to me."

    I cry and Zack holds me close to him and lowers us to the pavement,"Its ok Holly I'm here for you."

    Zack starts to softly sing and I look up at him,"Zack, where did you hear that song?"

    Zack looked at me and smiled,"You were saying it in your sleep when you were at the hospital waiting for me to wake up. Who came up with it?"

    I look at him for a minute and say,"My brothers and I came up with it after our grandfather died."

    He looks at me with so much love in his eyes,"Let's skip school and just go somewhere."
     
  9. bump!!!!!!! new reader!  and ii really like it!  good to see u updating so fast but if u can't update right away just knoe ur loyal readers will still be here. 



     
  10. This is fantastic!! 
     
  11. I nod my head and Zack stands up and takes my hand and helps me up,"You still look beautiful even with tears running down your face." He leans down and kisses me.

    I smile at him wiping my tears away and ask,"Where are we going Zack?"

    Zack takes my hand and leads me to his truck,"Anywhere we can." He opens the door for me and I get in and he shuts the door and gets in on his side and cranks his truck up.

    He drives us to the fairgrounds and I look at him and ask,"What are we doing here?"

    He looks at me and says,"I thought we would just walk around."

    I say,"Ok."

    Zack gets out and opens the door for me so I can get out. He takes my hand and squeezes it and says,"I'm never gonna let go of you."
     
  12. After an hour of walking around the fairgrounds talking and laughing with Zack he stops and turns to me,"Holly I love you so much. I don't even care what happened between you and Jerame or you and Cody. I just know I love you. I love everything about you. I love your smile, your laugh, the way you act all innocent when you do something and you get caught, the way you always try to help people, and I love that you are all mine."

    I smile at Zack and kiss him. What else can you do after something like that?

    Zack looks at me and asks,"Would you like to go out with me this Friday?"