The Perfect Two

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HollyS, Dec 10, 2011.

  1. There's a possibility I might update tonight. The story is coming along well
     
  2. All of kkaattiieeshute's and all of sensualpie's and all of alida1901's
     
  3. The way Cody looked at me It was obvious he still loved me.
    I look at Cody and say,"Ok. Talk."

    Cody looks at me surprised and says,"Oh. Ok. Well um...I really really am sorry about the way I treated you. Yes I did like that girl and, Holly, I never told you this but I did cheat on you with her and I'm so so so so sooooo sorry. I never wanted to hurt you in any way and always seeing you with Zack well I hated it and I know that this isn't really the time or place to tell you all this but I do still love you. Even if you choose to be with Zack again I will always love you."

    I look at Cody a little surprised and say,"Cody I know you cheated on me. It was kinda obvious with the way you were acting around me. Cody I loved you and you hurt. I don't know who I want to be with. It might be Zack but I don't know. Right now I'm worried about Zack."

    Cody sighs and looks down and says,"I understand Holly." He looks up and smiles and says,"I just had to say all this to you or else I would have gone insane."

    I smile back and say,"Well I'm glad you did and that you apologized for it."

    Cody gives a small laugh and says,"Me too." He looks at his watch and says,"I gotta go. Let me know when Zack wakes up."
    And with that he left leaving me there with Zack.
     
  4. I go and sit in the chair and look at Zack hoping he would wake up soon. Jerame hit him pretty hard. The doctors had said if that punch was any harder it could have broken his jaw.

    I don't remember falling asleep but when I woke up Zack was awake and smiling at me very faintly.

    I looked at him embarrassed and said,"I didn't mean to fall asleep Zack I was waiting for-"

    He cut me off and said,"It's fine."
    He looked at me and asked,"Can you come here?"

    I get up from the chair and walk over to him. Zack pulls me down to sit on the bed and says,"Thank you for staying. I know what I did was stupid and reckless but I did it because I love you and only you."
     
  5. Bump it's so good the story
     
  6. BUMP!!! Wow THREE GUYS!!
     
  7. Zack takes my hand and holds it close to him.

    The door opens and Jerame walks in.

    Zack glares at him,"What the F*CK are you doing here?!?!"

    Jerame says,"Man I told you I could knock you out with one punch. I didn't want to hurt you man." Jerame looked at me still sitting on the side of Zack's bed. Jerame said,"Holly I'm sorry for everything I did to you."

    Before I go on I should tell what Jerame did do. I was 13, a freshman in high school and Jerame was in one of my classes. Of course as all freshmen girls get crushes on upperclassmen I got a crush on Jerame. Jerame was at least 4 years older than me and one day he just asked me out. Of course I said yes and we started dating and everything was great until we....well.....had sex. I was only 13 though so it made me love him more. Then we found out I was pregnant. No one else knew except for my parents and his. But a few months later I had complications and lost the baby. Jerame and I broke and I intended to never see him ever again.
    And I now he's back and still no one knows about what happened...not even Zack...
     
  8. Hope y'all like the update
     
  9. Thanks I was typing it up during my US Government class. We didn't have anything to do because Wednesday is our last day until January
     
  10. Ok so that I in the last sentence after the word 'and' should not be there. Sorry guys. Theres a few typos because I was trying to not get caught on my phone
     
  11. Zack looked at me and then Jerame then back at me. The look in his eyes said he was frustrated and just wanted the truth.

    I looked at Jerame and sighed and said,"Zack I think it's time I tell you the truth."

    After telling Zack everything he just stared at me and Jerame. The look in his eyes were anger and hurt and a flash of betrayal but as soon as that flash of betrayal came in it was gone again.
    I looked at him and said,"Zack...I'm sorry."

    He looked at me with so much hatred and betrayal,"Go away! Both of you!"

    I just stared at him and said,"But Zack-"

    He cut me off and said,"NOW!!! I NEVER WANT TO SEE YOU AGAIN!!!!"

    I ran out of his room crying with Jerame right behind.
    Jerame put his arms around me and said,"It's gonna be ok."

    I push Jerame off and yell,"THIS IS YOUR FAULT!!!!" I run away from him and run towards the school wanting to just get in my car.