I cannot wait that long. D: Plus, by then it'll no longer be "tonight", it'll be morning. D: Or at least here, anyway. :3
~~~~~~~ Run...that's all I could do was run. Trees hitting me violently. The heartdropping fear as the ground next to me would rise from their bullets. The jungle was thicker and thicker... He screamed "THERE HE IS! KILL HIM NOW!" I almost fell, I felt so weak from fear. I wanted to throw up. The bullets kept flying. I was scared. "HE'S HEADING TO THE ROPE BRIDGE!" Rope bridge!?! What the **** is that!?! Then it made since. I skidded to a halt as a long broken down plank bridge appeared before me. "GET HIM!" I had no choice, I carefully shuffled my feet across the bridge. Stepping on each plank so carefully. That's when I saw it. A guy, holding what looked like a giant gun. He had a sniper, but he wasn't aiming at me. I followed his gaze and my heart stopped. He was aiming at the rope at the other end. BAM! He shot with the skill of a pro and the rope broke. I violently flailed for a plank, receiving a countless of bloody splinters. I was swinging right toward the rock wall. Getting ever so close... I vomited on impact, it falling into the water below. I followed it down... SPLASH! I was thrashing violently, desperately seeking air. My vision blurred and got dark. My head feeling light... Was I dead?
Actually a lot of the inspiration is coming from "Most Dangerous Game" it's a short story UPDATE TONIGHT
Nicky babeI has no idea you were such a good writer It's a great story I thought it sounded a little like the most dangerous game that's a great story too