The Paladin's Journey

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Omitch (01), May 28, 2011.

  1. Don't give up man, this story is so great, and I will create an Off-Topic post if I have to
     
  2. Fine I will
     
  3. Thanks man. I'm too tired to update tonight but I'll give ya a good one tomorrow cuz you did that
     
  4. Aww thanks man
     
  5. At that moment, Etzin burst into the room. "Avion! Are Ye alright, lad? I heard about what happened and hurried over!" Etzin said in a rush of words.
    "I'm fine," Avion replied, "Thanks to this young lady here." He smiled at her, and she blushed. "Please, call me Kylee," she said to him sweetly.
    "I can do that... Kylee," Avion replied with a wink. She blushed again. "Get yerselves a room!" Etzin said while laughing. Kylee gave Etzin a sarcastic glare.
    "Can't you see we already have one?" Kylee said, gesturing all around.
    Etzin was caught off guard. "Oh. Um, right," he replied. Luckily for him, at that moment Fletch called up the stairs.
    "Etzin! Get your ass down here! It looks like a brawl is about to begin!" he shouted. With that, Etzin's face lit up like that of a giddy child who had just gotten a new toy. He flew out the door, all the while shouting, "If you slimy bastards start without me there's gonna be hell t'pay!"
     
  6. This is really good, and if I haven't already told you my character is English so he would've said arse
     
  7. Oh you didn't tell me lol
     
  8. Oh sorry lol, I think you should make a modern spin off of this
     
  9. Lol with like a soldier trying to stop hitler from rising from the dead?
     
  10. Umm not that surreal but more like stopping a terrorist leader, and if you do do something like that I wanna be a British secret agent
     
  11. Maybe. I'm honestly writing whatever pops into my head. I'm thinking of stopping the story at a certain point and then making a second title kinda like lord of the rings
     
  12. Sounds good but I wanna see something like this but modern because I wanna be a British agent in a story because I've been watching too much James Bond
     
  13. Lol maybe once this story concludes. I want to actually write out a plot, and not just poop out a story. Although this one is pretty decent lol
     
  14. Yeah, sounds cool
     
  15. Awesome sauce. I like it.
     
  16. No update tonight. I was too busy all day
     
  17. Suddenly a column of blue smoke shot up next to the bed. The next instant, Danny was standing beside Avion and scanning him with his magical eye.

    "You have some bruising around your temple, but other than that you're in fighting condition. Anyway, Fletch and I managed to gather up enough supplies to last us til the next town, so we should probably be on our way," Danny told him. He hadn't even noticed Kylee on the other end of the bed. He turned around defensively when she spoke up.
    "Where's the hero going? On a magnificent journey? I'm so envious," she purred sarcastically.
    "If you must know, we are going to stop the evil-..." Danny began, but he was cut off as Avion spoke over him.
    "Indeed we are. Would you care to join us?"
     
  18. People who read my story feel free to join my new club! You can have a paladin title!
     
  19. Hey guys sorry I haven't updated. I've been really busy but I plan on making one tomorrow