The Other Guy

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *ThisIsJoycee (01), Nov 29, 2011.

  1. Yeah, so I am not inspired and I think the story kinda died so imma revive it because exams just finished and I AM FREE! So yeah here's an update

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    Diana's POV

    "TAKE 5 EVERYBODY!" Jade screamed at all of us, particularly giving me the death stare.

    Yeah, she still didn't believe me nor did she even listen to me.

    "I swear if that girl does not shut up I am going to kick her a**" Chloe, one of the cheerleaders said to me.

    We all snickered.

    "What is this? ARE YOU GIRLS HORSEPLAYING ?" She shouted, as always with spit spraying everywhere.

    It was dead silent as everybody nonchalantly stared at her.

    "WELL? WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR? GO!"

    I swear I could see the veins popping out of her almost exploding head as if it already wasn't big enough.

    We all ran to the center starting to form the pyramid, seeing that Jade obviously couldn't wait for another minute.

    "FASTER! IM NOT GETTING ANY YOUNGER!"

    See I told you she just couldn't wait

    Suddenly, she went up to me and gave another one of her death glares.

    "Diana." She hissed.

    "Yes?" I said, pretending to bat my eyelashes.

    "GET . DOWN . FROM . THERE." She said with a pause after every word.

    "But I'm already up here!"

    She was completely ridiculous.

    "Fine!" She threw her hands up in exasperation.

    I smirked, thinking that I got the upper hand.

    "I'll just have to get you down myself " Now it was her turn to smirk.

    My eyes widened at hearing her threatning words.

    In a quick movement she pushed the skinniest girl in the pyramid, who in turn wobbled and sent the whole team falling.

    Yes, she was THAT CRAZY.

    I screamed, seeing as I was at the top of the pyramid.

    Yeah. Not a very good place to be at right now.

    In a millisecond, I hit the ground on my back hearing a loud cracking sound.

    I felt a hot searing pain on my shoulder and was thankful that I landed on something softer than the ground.

    "ARE YOU SUICIDAL?" Jessica shouted.

    "Relax! At least there were mats" She said, laughing.

    Yeah, she WAS CRAZY. And for an apparent reason I felt the need to slap her in the face.

    I didn't mind my broken arm. I just wanted to break her pretty face.

    "ARE YOU DEMENTED?" I stood up, still a little wobbly.

    "DO YOU REALLY THINK YOU CAN TREAT US LIKE DOLLS? AND TORTURE US ALL DAY?"

    I screamed, ten times louder. My head was starting to pound and now it was my turn to have my veins pop out.

    "Seriously?"

    " OKAY THAT'S IT! I QUIT! " I said as I stormed off alone.

    "ME TOO!" I think if it was Jessica, shouted.

    "WELL IM OUT OF HERE!" A couple of cheerleaders chorused.

    "PEACE OUT!" Another shouted.

    The last person I saw was Angela.

    But then I saw her walk off too, leaving Jade all alone.

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    Yeah, so did ya guys like it? I'm probably gonna do another update in 30 minutes. Keep bumpin'
     
  2. I think my next update will be tomorrow guys
     
  3. bump!!!!! 




     
  4. My idea!  BUMP! 
     
  5. Ugghh I feel no inspiration?

    Did ya guys REALLY LIKE IT?
     
  6. BUMP
     
  7. YOOHOO! You guys still there?
    Yeah, it's an update!
    Here you go guys!

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    Austin's POV

    "Dude, you shouldv'e seen the showdown at the gym!" Greyson laughed.

    "What showdown?" I asked.

    "You know the one between Diana and Jade?"

    "Diana?" I was surprised. I didn't think Diana would ever have a "showdown". Especially not with Jade.

    "Yeah. I heard she had a pretty nasty fall." Zach, a good friend of mine added.

    "A fall?" It was like my heart stopped for a moment.

    But before they could add any more comments, I ran straight to the gym.

    Wht could've happened to her?

    A broken arm?

    A broken leg?

    I shouldn't even be thinking of these right now. I needed to get to her.

    Hopefully, she wasn't hurt.


    I ran as fast as I could, just in time to see Diana, slightly limping in the hallway.

    Why wasn't she getting any help?

    I looked at her, trying to catch my breath.

    "Diana!" I shouted despite my panting.

    "Austin?" She turned to me.

    " Aren't you supposed to be at practice? You know coach is gonna kill you."

    She looked straight at me with a worried expression.

    I can't believe she was worried about me, when she was practically injured.

    "Aren't you supposed to be in the hospital?"

    Without waiting for her answer, I went up to her and cupped her face.

    "Who told you?" She said, turning her face away from me.

    "What happened?" I turned her face to face me and stroked her cheek, not answering her question.

    "I sorta fell...?" She said it like she was asking me, as a tear drops fell from her eyes.

    I gently stroked her cheek again.

    Why did she have to be so cute?

    "Are you alright?"

    "Umm...I think I might have broken something...Austin, it really hurts."

    "Then we need to get you to the hospital fast!" I said, as I kissed her forehead and picked her up bridal style.

    As I pushed the school doors open, I heard a loud gasp from Diana, as she tightly clutched my arm.

    "What are you doing here?" She said, eyes wide open.

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    Sorry for the "shortness" of the story and yes, that's right A CLIFFHANGER!

    My next update will update the mystery person.

    Xoxo
     
  8. Please leave comments and suggestions! Open to criticisms and more
     
  9. Oh and TYPO
    *My next update will reveal the mystery person."