The One?

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Beth0411, Jan 1, 2012.

  1. BUMP BUMP IM READING!!! :O
     
  2. It's amazing! Sorry I wasn't on yesterday
     
  3. Ok, I'll update tonight
     
  4. His eyes wandered around our appartement..it was in a bit of a state..

    Wait who's boxers were those? Must be Leo's...I quickly ran over and stuffed them behind the couch...gross I know, but just for know.

    "nice place! I'm impressed." Dom said soundly

    "thanks..it has the basics..the kitchen," I gestured to the kitchen and he nodded in approval.

    "the bathroom.." I also pointed at the bathroom.

    "and the bedroom." I said finally gesturing the bedroom, bit of a forward move there..woops!

    Dom raised an eyebrow at me, and moved closer, this made me nervous..like proper, before an audition for a movie nerves.. "ha. ha. ha....ermm do you want a drink." I stuttered.

    He didn't say anything, just shook his head and bit his bottom lip.

    "we could just go now?" he suggested, shrugging his shoulders, and putting up his arm for me to interlock mine into.

    I did just that and we whisked away out of the appartment.

    I knew I wouldn't be back alone.....
     
  5. Bumpz  this is good..cant wait for moarr 
     
  6. If she cheats on Leo I'm gonna cry and stop reading
     
  7. Aww I love how you are getting into this story! And don't worry..she hasn't cheated on him...and she won't..consciously
     
  8. Dom took me to a restaurant..i couldn't afford to pee in a place like this let alone eat there!

    "Dom...I can't...I've got not enough cash." I said disheartened.

    "don't worry Em...I have plenty." he smugly said.

    That made me a bit annoyed actually..showed he was a bit up himself, his looks disguised his personality.

    "ha.." I said shortly.

    He frowned, "what's wrong?" he said folding his arms.

    I stood there, still as a statue, this was too much. I've cheated too many times, and poor Leo. He was the only one who visited me when I was in hospital. And I live with him for heavens sake?!

    I...I think I...loved Leo.

    "okaay..we can just go back to mine?" Dom suggested, trying to cut the tension.

    "no." I blurted out, surprised I actually said it aloud.

    He looked puzzled, "what?" he said, shock in his voice.

    "look Dom...I don't even know you." he went to interupt, "properly." I corrected myself.

    "I..I shouldn't have come out tonight..i'm sorry. I'll call you sometime? We can be friends..I just... I just...." I stuttered.

    He shifted his weight into his other foot and folded his arms.

    "I have to go.." I said politely and walked out of the door.

    I took a deep sigh of relief, finally, for once I didn't feel guilty...

    But that feeling would come back to haunt me when I got home...
     
  9. I grabbed the first taxi I saw, "21 Park Avenue please." I said to the taxi driver.

    "sure thing." he replied happily.

    He was a large man, and from what I could see, had eyes icy blue, like a husky.

    The cab smelt of corndogs and Doritos. It made me feel a bit queasy.

    "so what's a pretty lady like you doing out this late?" he chirped.

    "a date." I said shortly, thr smell was really getting to me and it pained me to open my mouth and let te scent waft through again.

    "oh right." he said solemnly.

    I sat there holding my breath, why did I feel so sick? I usually love corndogs and Doritoes. This was crazy!

    I suddenly remembered..the window!! I went to open it, winding the knob round at the speed of light.

    "that windows broken I'm afraid." he said, taking a unhumanley huge bite out of his corndog.

    As he spoke he spat crumbs everywhere, that was it I couldn't stand this anymore.

    I think I was going to...I was going to...

    BLEEEUURRRGGHHH!

    I had thrown up in his cab, and he didn't look too happy.

    The wheels of the taxi screeched to a halt, making me jolt back and forth.

    "out." he said, his tone completley dropped like a pscicsofrenic.

    I hurridley got out and ran as far as I could in the direction I knew was home.
     
  10. I stopped running as I got out of breath.

    I mustve been walking for a at least 45 minutes.

    Was I going in the right direction? Was I lost? I couldn't tell.

    I kept on walking, in the dark, only a few streetlamps buzzed and flickered up ahead, that looked like our street, but still, I wasn't too sure.

    I slowed right down and scratched my head with confusion. I really didn't feel well...

    Then I heard a car slow behind me, I looked over my shoulder. leo's car.

    Oh crap.

    He got out and walked round to open the passenger door for me then he got back in.

    I was hesitant at first but I had to explain why I was even out. I hope he'd understand.

    Nothing. He didn't say anything. Not one word.

    He didn't even look at me.

    "th..thank you, for finding m...." my voice cracked as it trailed off.

    I sat there, ashamed. How could I have even thought about cheating on Leo...he was the One. I knew it.

    I turned on te radio, to break the silence.

    He turned it off.

    "we'll talk when we are home." he said monotone.

    Oh my god, this could be the end. I ddnt want it to be.

    Why was I such a...such a...."a selfish slut!" I said aloud by accident, murging my thoughts into my speech.

    "hmph, I'll say." Leo agreed with me.

    He had a right to be angry, but he didn't know that I rejected Dom! Surely when he found out then he'd forgive me?

    But there was one teeny tiny detail I wasn't too sure about...
     
  11. Two updates?!

    Wow you guys are lucky haha, any ideas what this detail is????