The Nightmare Man

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -SE_Millielicious, Jan 20, 2012.

  1. -Gasp- OMG!!


    BUMP!!
     
  2. NO!So she IS wearing a black lingerieWheres the next page of the story?
     
  3. BUMPBUMPBUMPBUMPBUMPBUMPBUMPBUMPBUMPBUMPBUMPBUMPBUMPBUMPBUMPBUMP!
     
  4. Updating pretty soon, just thinking up something now:)
     
  5. ᏰᏌᎷᎵ!!!! 
     
  6. 

    The man had only poured petrol on my midriff as far as I could tell, but I knew if one tiny spark so much as touched my dress, that was it.

    Suddenly, a huge booming sound rang out behind me, and fresh flames lit up the nearer trees. 'The flames must have found some petrol where I was lay' I thought.

    I continued sprinting as fast as I could to escape the raging fire, but I was exhausted, I must have been running for miles now. I felt my pace get slower as I got more and more out of breath, I urged myself to go on running, but it was no use.

    I tried my very hardest to get away, but curling flames began to twist around my ankles, and they were dragging me back with every flicker.

    I winced in pain as the heat scolded my feet and I began thinking to myself. 'Why don't I just give up? I have nothing to live for anyway. Just stop now. Stop.'

    I slowed down even more and braced myself for death, but then I heard something revving up close by. 'A street!' I gasped, both out of breath and amazed. I found the power inside of me to run. Run as fast as I can, and don't stop. It was little more than twenty seconds before I burst into a baron street, and collapsed.

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  7. It should have been *not stop instead of don't, oopsie
     
  8. And *could instead of can. My brains not switched on today 
     
  9. So good! 
     
  10. BUMPNow you should write more
     
  11. I'm too tired to think of an update now, I'll do it in the morning:)
     
  12. Bump