The Mystery Girl

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Dj_Comet, Jan 16, 2013.

  1. BUMP N WALL ME WHEN UPDATED
     
  2. Update!
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    Alex's POV

    When I saw Aaron and Maddison embracing each other, I couldn't hold in my laugh and I laughed my ass of. They finally looked at each other and jumped from one another, Maddison was blushing and Aaron, well lets say he was acting normal.

    "I'm sorry, I didn't mean to
     
  3. Sorry Continued!
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    "I didn't mean to." Maddison said while turning red.

    Aaron looked at her and said, "Well at the very least you should've tried to seduce me before we died." Me and Emily started laughing, but Maddison's response sounded… like she like that idea. Chills for a week.

    "All you could ask for was to be seduced?! You don't think I'm sexier than that or you to scared to mess witjh a princess?"

    "Hey hey , 1: this is a sixteen year old life not a anime, 2: Why are you both thinking the same thing?"

    Their reaction was hilarious, they looked at each other and fell of the couch. Maddison was having a fantasy because she turned even redder than before and Aaron kept repeating the same thing, "Me and Maddison? As a couple or better lovers?" I thought this was a dream and piched mty face, arm, leg, and yes I do say this ass. Unfortanetly, it wasn't a dream, obviously this was going to end with a bang.
     
  4. Ooooo gooood update
     
  5. so good please update!!!
     
  6. This is so good . You really improved 
     
  7. Update
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    Emily's POV

    Its been a month since that night, and since then Maddison confessed to me she fell hard for my brother.

    "Awww, thats so cute. You two would make a beautiful couple!" I said excitily.

    "I think that all the time, his melting brown eyes and his cool demeaner. That time he held me at the marionnete dance," and she kept on fantasizing.

    Class ended and we started walking to our next class. On our way there, we saw Aaron. Maddison eyes started to drift off, I had to snap my fingers to bring her back.

    "Oh sorry, its just… you know"

    Just then Meghan Gonzalez, the cheer leader captain, walked up to Aaron.

    "I was just wondering, would you like to go out?" I looked at Maddison and her expression was saddened. What we heard next was unexpected and hilarious.

    "Let me think… go-a to-a hell, first you get all the cheerleaders to jump girls who have higher grades than you, which all of the cheerleaders GPA combined is barely a 1.37. Second, Alex is in the hospital because you got your Ex to shoot him, just because he called you a slut. If you wasn't a girl, I would've sent you to hell myself, now get out my sight."

    Meghan ran away hands in face, I started laughing so hard but then I just realized he said Alex was in the hospital
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  8. Bump when ya can
     
  9. Maddison's POV
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    I was devastated, my friend was in the hospital and I didn't even know.

    "How long has he been in there?!" Emily questioned. Aaron looked at her, " Since last week, he was bowlong with his sister and mom." SMACK!! Emily's hand went across his face.

    "Did you think we wouldn't want to know?! Me and you have known him since we were kids, he's like our big brother! Why would you not tell us?" She started to tear up. Aaron rubbed hos face then gave her a hug.

    "Don't worry, we'll see him after school."

    I looked at him and asked, "Is he concious?"

    "Of course, one bullet can't stop a gorrila," he joked. Emily started to smile a little. "I don't think thats funny," because honestly, how is someone getting shot funny?

    Then I noticed something, " Uh… Aaron, you have a tear running down your cheek." He turned and wiped it off quick, "I had something in my eye."

    Emily leaned towards me, "Is that why you fell for him? If so then, he's naturally a crybaby." I kinda blushed and right before I could reply Aaron cut me off

    "I think passing period ended roughly around 9 minutes ago, and unless you want detention we better get going." We all agreed and decided to meet up on the side of the school.

    When I turned around, a man in a black suit was standing there, " Miss Kennway, your dad told you to stay away from this group."

    "Ruppert, I told you its Maddison Triplett, not Maddison Kennway. I don't take my fathers surname. Plus, stop stalking me, its creepy."

    "Well ma'am, with all do respect, your father is govenor, and he's only trying to protect his only daughter. He also requested if that kid or the one in the hospital puts you on harms way, they will be dissposed of."

    With that said, Ruppert walked down the hallway, leaving me alone.
     
  10. Ohhhhhh bump