The Mystery Girl

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Dj_Comet, Jan 16, 2013.

  1. Found this and decided I'd read it. I made a wonderful choice. Keep going!  it. Bumpdate!
     
  2. I might cut the story, sorry. I'll keep you posted on my decision
     
  3. Nooooo keep writting
     
  4. I'll continue only because of the readers
     
  5. Update!!! When you can
     
  6. Alex's POV
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    I didn't hear what I thought she just said, did I? This girl is suspicious, and I can't shake this uneasy feeling that something bad will happen. I look at Aaron, he finally snapped out of that shock. He looked at me and said"Alright I'm off to practice" While he was walking away he suddenly had stopped, looking at a tree. At first I didn't see anything but then he moved, a tall man in a black suit, sunglasses, and a earpiece. He was watching us, I slowly turned and looked at Maddison.

    "Just who are you, Maddison Triplett?!"
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    sorry its so short, next one will be longer :)
     
  7. Woahh!! Didnt see that coming...UPDATE
     
  8. Just checking something:)
     
  9. Update!
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    I wonder what that guy was staring at? I looked over at Alex and it seemed like he knew.

    "Who cares about him, it is time for practice." I walked to the locker room to changed into my basketball shorts and practice jersey. One hour later practice ended, I got dressed and went home. When I got home I couldn't beleive who was there sitting next to Emily, it was Maddison.

    "Uh, hey Maddison, what are you doing here?"

    "Oh your sister invited me over." I glared at Emily with intense eyes. "Why is this girl here, she is nothing but trouble!"

    "Wow calm down dad, she isn't evil."

    "Thats not the point, you know I'm shy around girls." Emily laughed and said evily, " shy enough that he would die."
     
  10. Update continued
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    We all laughed. "Fine, just this once. I'm going to take a shower." I got in the shower, and a few minutes later got out. I put on some camo cargo shorts, black shirt, camo baseball hat, and black vans. When I went back to Emily and Maddison, they saved a seat for me on the couch.

    "Here sit next to me," was what Maddison said. I sat down and Emily got some popcorn, while Maddison put on a horror movie.

    "Do you think you girls are up to watch these movies?" They looked at me, then at each other and laughed. I shruged my shoulders and the movie they put in was"Quarintine". During the movie the girls were screaming, I think one of those times were me though. When the movie ended, there was a loud crash by our window. Maddison jumped into my arms and I thought nothing of it. The window opened slowly. My last thought was, Is this the end of my story?
     
  11. Nooo update!!!!!!!!
     
  12. Next update 5 Days or less :)