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Chapter 10 Callie POV "Oh, like you actually care," Serenity complained. "What's up with you that you're so invested in this game, anyway?" "Well, I can do this, or I can die," she stated matter-of-factly. "That's a lovely prospect," I muttered. She looked at me and I continued. "Who, exactly, is going to kill you?" "One of the game master's minions, I suppose. They didn't clarify that point, other than to tell me that it would be harmful to my health if I didn't comply to their rules and demands." I sighed. Everything here was about pain, fear, and death. I cringe at what horrors come to my mind when I imagine the worst possible scenarios. Glancing over at Brenda, it appears she is following the same thought process as me, or something similar. At least I have her here to make sure I don't kill myself by something stupid.