The Muderer in the Box

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *ChristianandBells (01), May 14, 2012.

  1. Woops meant to say Maria and Zach
     
  2. Story Plot

    Just about when we r all comfortable, a huge grandfather clock strikes 12am and we r all shaken up, grabbing at the air and walls for balance. We all hear a moan, but ignore it, yet it becomes louder. Almost like a dead person screaming for help, they moan again...
     
  3. Story Plot

    The clock does not stop ringing it's loud toll and the moan does not stop, it sounds like its coming closer, but from all over the place...we all look at each other and hear footsteps coming towards us, they stop....takes another...moans and a hand falls onto Jenny's shoulder
     
  4. Story Plot

    She screams and we all bac up and the clock has stopped but the hand is nothing but a dark shadow and pulls Jenny bac, she flies into a statue and falls the ground crawling towards us, yet another moan and her leg is grabbed and she is pulled into the darkness and she screams, yet we hear a loud snap and her screams roar again! We hear yet another loud snap and as if human flesh was ripped off, the screams die
     
  5. Oh my gosh......... Please don't let me die early or possibly not at all just not early
     
  6. Story Plot

    Everyone is silent and the foot steps r gone, the moaning is gone, the clock tickings full the silence. We all look at each other and tears streaming down everyone's faces...except for Bella's, but she immediately looks down and tears well up....everyone is speechless and only awkward and ticks fill the air
     
  7. Lol I'd never cry no joke I don't know y I'd be scared as hell but I wouldn't cry
     
  8. Story Plot

    The room then starts shaking again and we all fall screaming and we open our eyes to the box, but this time with crappy little beds. We each walk over to one, in similar clothings, scrubs. We each look at each other and then sit on the beds and wait
     
  9. Oh...my...well that's depressing
     
  10. So I'm out of my princess dress???
     
  11. Game Controller POV

    "Well now, Jenny dearest seemed to have no interest in staying alive, one piece down many more to go (evil soft laugh) now u all stay quiet for tomorrow's game.....sleep well Linda (evil laugh and it goes away)"
     
  12. Why scrubs? Why not dinosaur costumes?
     
  13. Cause this is my creepy story lol
     
  14. Dinosaurs are pretty creepy...
     
  15. I love this story!!
     
  16. Dinosaurs are pretty creepy...
     
  17. This is so creepy... poor jenny...
     
  18. Ali POV

    "Hmmm I feel like a creepy doctor" we all fake laugh and you look down then up only with ur eyes "don't be afraid my children, it will only hurt a little" we all scream except fan and u who bust out laughing
     
  19. Omgz thts more like me 