The mistake

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Oox-Zoe-xoO, Apr 28, 2011.

  1. Ꮭol... I still wanna be in the story...
     
  2. ᎾK really nikki...
     
  3. Whoa I'm preggers?????
     
  4. Yup.  Mini-Peedobear in their way.. 
     
  5. Lots of wrong-spelling.
     
  6. I'm a police man?! 
     
  7. Here's ya update lmao 

    Keena sighed loudly and turned the tv off rubbing her head trying to get rid of the migraine, her phone vibrated next to her and she checked it,

    1 NEW TEXT MESSAGE
    Jess x
    08:14 5th May

    She pressed the open button reminiscing her past memories with Zoe's sister, she missed her so much, she missed Zoe more though

    Hii! Hru?? I hve sum news fr ya, meet me costa @9, Jess xx

    Keena got up from the couch and walked back towards her bedroom, andy should have been back by now, she bit her nails as she wondered what had happened to him and looked for clothes to wear to meet Jess, it never once crossed Keena's mind that she should call the police about andy, after all he had left his jacket and phone here.

    Keena sat down inside with a black coffee and waited for jess. Jess was Zoe's sister and one of her very close friends, the door to costa swung open and in walked jess in her designer trainers and hoodie, keena laughed quietly and waved her over to her table "Jess!!"
    Jess waved back and walked over, she gave keena a hug as she sat down "how have you been jess?"
    "meh so so" she sighed "a lot worse though after what I saw last night, that's also why I'm here"
    Keena sipped her coffee "whats happened?"
    "well" she paused "I'm not sure if it was her but I think I saw Zoe last night" she paused again "murder somebody"
    Keena sighed, this was exactly like Zoe "what time was this?"
    "I Don't know, maybe 2am?"
    "and why were you out at that time?"
    "taking Tilly for a walk"
    "oh sorry, tillys my new puppy"
    "ah ok, well what do you suppose we do?"
    "I suggest we storm in at Conners house because that's where I saw her go with the man and conner"
    "ok meet me outside my apartment at 10pm ok?"
    "see ya at 10" jess said getting up to leave
     
  8. Ohhhh!!! I'm rich 
     
  9. JESS! Talk on cc lmao
     
  10. Ohhhh!!! Im still dead!! 
     
  11. Omigawd!!!!!!! It's been ages guys I'm so so sorry!!! I've just been really busy 

    Keena stared vacantly out of her window wondering what andy was up to now. He hadn't been back to collect his jacket and phone as they were still in the same place, you would expect her to be worried right? Well your wrong, she wasn't, keena was more concerned over Zoe and her safety, she was also worried about jess, she should have set the meeting time earlier as it wasn't safe to be out at this time of night, but then again jess was a good fighter and could kill a guy easily if she really wanted too.

    Keena sipped her drink and looked down at what she was wearing, black joggers, black trainers and black hoodie, yeah that seemed to be the safest thing ever to wear.

    She heard the door bell go and answer it to see jess standing on her door step wearing all black too
    "we match" jess teased giggling
    "hahaha"
    "ready to go?"
    "yeah"
    The scene with andy replayed over and over in her head, almost the exact same words had been said yet this time there was no happiness or fun behind the words, instead there was complete seriousness and scaredness for what lay ahead for keena and jess
     
  12. Omg...I copied Tilly from Becca and I didn't even know 
     
  13. Or did she copy me? O.0
     
  14. If I coppied u Qin then sorry  i haven't read any of your stories