The mistake

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Oox-Zoe-xoO, Apr 28, 2011.

  1. "just finished the deal babe" I said to conner down the phone
    "good, I've nearly finished cleaning your gun, you on your way back?"
    "yep cya in 10 love you"
    "love you too" conner said back to me as I hung up.

    The events from before played in my head, I shouldn't have pulled the trigger, Nathan didn't deserve to die. I turned to walk down the ally to get back to Conners, why did I always end up killi- "WAIT!!!!!!" a voice screamed out from behind me
    I turned around sharply bringing my gun out pointing towards this guy, his hands shot right up, he tried to catch his breath "your.... Girl.... Town centre.... Window.... Me"
    I turned around and ran, he'd seen me kill Nathan and now I was panicking "aw hell no! Wait!!" I heard the guy run after me behind me, so I did what I've been trained to do. I turned back around got conners gun out and shot him right in the chest.
     
  2. Sad bit ... I hated that bit ... And I said yes ... Sorry "random guy"
     
  3. Sorry andy u die 
     
  4. Hehe Andy *raises hand* that's why I was off on pal with rose a lot .. Devising your death mwhaahah
     
  5. Sorry :shock:
     
  6. Yay! me not dead yet i still need part though 
     
  7. Killing keena's lover ...

    I know the whole story ..

    ~Chris
    Ps. Pm me for spoilers..
    Nah jk
     
  8. I wanna be in the story..
     
  9. YEAH BUDDY! GET IT IN! xD
     
  10. Here! Your in it now jess, but I may still kill you  I'll do an update while I'm out so you'll have one when I get back :)

    Conners head shot up, he knew that sound and scream. He raced out into the back ally to find Zoe shaking and really White (well she looked White in the available light) "Zoe, are you ok?"
    "I shot him"
    "aw Hun, nathan deserved it."
    "no. Him" Zoe said pointing behind me with the gun, I turned around to see a man laying flat on the floor
    "did you know him?"
    "yes, no, maybe.... Ugh I dont know, I've seen him before yes but I've never spoken to him"
    "why did you shoot him??"
    "because he saw me with Nathan"
    Conner breathed in sharply and went over to the man, he held his wrist and checked for a pulse "he's got a pulse but it's weak, help me move him inside the house"
    Zoe grabbed his feet and lifted him while conner lifted his shoulders, but what they didn't know is that from the shadows Jess had been watching all of happen and she was crying

    She had seen her sister, the sister who she was meant to hate but she didn't.
     
  11. Poor Andy ... Dieing ... Being dragged of by murderer then zoe's sister who should hate her especially now ! Doesn't ... Talk about family problems ...
     
  12. You lied to me Rebecca... 





    Jk







    I'm never chosen for any stories anyway.







    Reading and lurking is fun. 
     
  13. *cough* Im... N.. Not... Deea... Deead.. *cough*
     
  14. *cough* Ge... Get me.... To... Keen... Keena... *cough*
     
  15. Jess watched as she saw her sister and conner take the man into his home, she sniffed and wiped her nose with the back of her hand "cmon Tilly lets keep walking" jess said to her huski puppy she had named Tilly
    "woof" is all Tilly said in response. Jess bent down and picked Lilly off the ground giving her a big hug before she started walking down the ally.

    **1 HOUR BEFORE THE MISTAKE**

    "I HATE YOU!" jess screamed down the stairs at Zoe "YOU'VE RUINED MY LIFE!!"
    "jess... Wait... Please..." Zoe pleaded with jess
    "WAIT FOR WHAT?! YOU TO RUIN MY LIFE AGAIN?! NO THANKYOU!"
    "jess your being a drama queen, your making it seem worse than it really is."
    "I AM NOT!!! YOU'RE MOVING OUT TO LIVE WITH YOUR BOYFRIEND AND LEAVING ME TO COPE WITH DAD!!"
    Zoe sighed "I'm sorry, you know I'll still come and visit"
    "YEAH RIGHT!!! YOU'RE GONNA DISAPPEAR LIKE LAST TIME"
    "Jess please calm down, dads going to be home any minute now, I don't want to deal with 2 angry people"
    "SCREW YOU SIS!!" Jess screamed at Zoe charging into her room and locking the door behind her.