The mistake

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Oox-Zoe-xoO, Apr 28, 2011.

  1. ok so somehow I promised keena 5!!!!!! Updates, here they are all below, some will be short others long,

    The story is nearly finished and yes there will be a prequel, idk who will be the main character yet but there WILL be opening slots for other people,
     
  2. Keena and andy run down the long dark alleyway not once pausing for a rest, they never once looked behind them either. They could hear their names being shouted out behind them. It was so similar to what had happened to Zoe.

    After about 5 more minutes of running they couldn't hear their names being shouted anymore
    "andy... Stop... I can't... Run.." keena said stoping and leaning against a wall. Andy looked at keena and sighed, she looked much worse than him, she was basically skin and bones. He walked over to keena and hugged her tightly making sure he was keeping her warm
    "can you run any further?" he asked, they needed to get back somewhere, best bet would be his place as Zoe didn't know where he lived
    "I think I can walk but not very far, I feel so weak" keena said quietly hugging andy tightly
    He sighed and picked her up in his arms "what are you doing?!" she shrieked
    "I'm taking you back to my place so we can get cleaned up and back to normal" he started walking towards his house.
     
  3. Where are the other four.






    *throws the app*


    I want my STORIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  4. "were never gonna be normal again andy" keena said sighing into his torso
    "no maybe not. But we can damn well sure try"
    Keena shook her head not believing him "I guess"
    "no babe we don't guess, we know" andy replied adamantly
    "whatever you say"
    Andy couldn't believe his ears, the once strong, powerful and beautiful keena sounded like she wanted to give up, if she gave up then there wouldn't be hope for any of them at all. If keena could survive it then everybody else could too.
     
  5. "keena....psst.... Wake up" andy said whispering to keena while gently shaking her to help her wake up
    "huh?" keena replied groggily opening her eyes, she was laying down in a bedroom, the wall infront of keena was brown with many beautiful samurai swords hung up against them. On the other Walls there was a collage of all different people, some were young while others were old. She guessed the old people were his family
    "please try staying quiet, I don't want my mum knowing your here just yet"
    "er....ok?" keena said sitting up "did I fall asleep while we were walking here?"
    Andy chuckled lightly and kissed keena softly "yeah you did" he said moving away from keena's lips,
    "why did you just kiss me?"
    "because I think your truly amazing and are worth the whole world after what you've been through"
    Keena felt tears stinging the corner of her eyes and wiped them away "thankyou"
    Andy moved forward and kissed keena again "no problem" keena kissed him back but more passionately
    "I guess you want some more coffee in the bedroom" keena asked jokingly
    "I thought you'd never ask"
     
  6. Where are the other two. Aaaarrrggghhhh



    *throws the Eiffel Tower. (sorry epic. First thing that came to mind.)*
     
  7. heey andy
    I LOVE IT ROSE!!!!!!
     
  8. I think cyber loves this story more than me... 
     
  9. Damn cyber  next it'll bre the tower of pisa
     
  10. I love it morreeee <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
     
  11. I'm obsessed!!!!!
     
  12. I'll write the other 2 later

    Thanks for the support tho guys 
     
  13. I already know what happens :lol: ... :cry: it's ... Not ... Nice
     
  14. OMG CHRIS!!!!! I thought that was an update grrr 
     
  15. She's working on one right now!!!
     
  16. HEY GUYS!!!  well ive decided that i will finish the story today or early tomorrow, love ya

    Keena woke up and rolled over to find for the first time ever andy was still there, "Wake up!!" keena whispered nudging andy
    "I aaaaammmmmm" andy groaned rolling over to face keena "enjoy last night?"
    Keena giggled "yes I enjoyed it alot did you?"
    Andy grabbed keena and pulled her into a tight cuddle "yes so much, keena babe??"
    "hmmmm?"
    "I love you"
    Keena looked up into Andys eyes "I love you too" she kissed his lips softly "I think we better think about getting up though if you dont want your mother catching me here" she said quickly changing the subject
    "oh god yeah!" andy shouted jumping up and falling over in the process, keena couldn't help but laugh at his dazed expression as she just imagined stars rotating around his head
    "ANDY?!?!?!?! IS THAT YOU?!" a voice screamed from across the hall, he presumed it was his mothers voice
    " crap " andy muttered under his breath "YES MUM!!!!" andy screamed back "IT'S ME!!", andy shot keena a look which basically said HIDE NOW!!

    Inside the wardrobe was where keena chose to hide, "I'll be back as soon as she goes out to bingo ok??"
    "ok" and with that andy kissed keena softly and shut the wardrobe door on her. She listened for Andys footsteps go down the stairs, she could hear andy and his mothers voice mumbling about something
    "andy... Sgt Josh called.... 8pm... Town centre"
    "ok...waffles?...trident"
    "yes....bingo....bye"
    "cya" were the only words keena was able to hear through the walls,