The mistake

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Oox-Zoe-xoO, Apr 28, 2011.

  1. ...omg :cry: that is sooo sad but amazing
     
  2. God no! It's just part of the story hun
     
  3. Wow...continue this is gettin' good 
     
  4. Poor keena.. 
    More? :]
     
  5. I'm sorry I left you Keena!
     
  6. Interesting...
     
  7. its ok jess...
    im with andy now
     
  8. Here's your flipping update keena 

    I got my gun and held it under her chin lifting it up so she could look at me, "play along" I mouthed the words at her
    "huh?" keena said confused
    I slapped her hard, "DO NOT SPEAK TO ME UNLESS I SPEAK TO YOU FIRST" I winked at her as she finally realised
    "sorry" she said looking downwards at my feet
    "good pet, now I'm going to ask you a question and then I might consider being nice to you skank, Understood?"
    "yes" keena mumbled so quietly I wasn't sure if she had said it at all
    "what were you doing behind conners house?"
    Keena made no reply, I grabbed her by her hair and pulled her face up so she had to look at me, I heard her whimper in pain, "WELL?!" I screamed at her face
    "I..I...I.."
    "SPIT IT OUT! OR I COULD JUST KILL YOU IF THATS WHAT YOU PREFER"
    "if you lay one more finger on her then I will kill you Zoe" a voice said from the shadows. I dropped keena's head and stood back up "ahh so our other pet is Alive and finally talking"
    "yes now like I said I will kill you" a quiet but powerful voice said from the shadows
    I laughed evilly "with what weapon?!"
    "this" I heard a gun lock and load behind me and then the cool cold metal pressed into my neck "let. Us. Go. Now." I gulped, this wasn't the way I wanted things to turn out at all, I hoped keena would say something about it being and act but she didn't "were gonna run outside now and away from here, if you follow us I will kill you"
     
  9. OMG!!!!!!!
    can I get another update?...
    Hehe
     
  10. GIMMEE MOOORRE!! 
     
  11. More!!! 
     
  12. ROSE U OWE ME 5 UPDATES!!
    where r they?
     
  13. Update whore
     
  14. Iol I fink ur copyin it from a book it's so good u got a talent. I'm to impatient to write a book lol. But ur really good Hun n I wanna c more plzzz In da story can she shoot her self. Lol no no jk dont do tht
     
  15. Awwh ty em, nope it's all me 100% original 