The Missing Wife

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *keena_is_back (01), Apr 20, 2011.

  1. LOVE IT!!!! Must have more. 
     
  2. it does have more...
     
  3. Can I be in it pls and make my name pain of u add me
     
  4. He tried to tidy the house and keeps himself busy, but it was no use. He was used to Jane cleaning the house and doing the dishes, and now he knew only a fraction of how hard it was for her. He heard the clock when it turned 2pm, so he got into his car and drove off, while the neighbours watched him drive past, giving him dirty looks.
    It was foggy and misty at George's street. There were people running with guns and knifes. Harry got out of his car and walked towards a big shadow, and then the shadow came closer and grew smaller. That's when he saw the face and almost fell over with shock. He got back to his feet and saw how terrified Jane's face was.
    "Please let her go David," pleaded Harry.
    "What if she doesn't want to go, what if she wants to stay with me?" replied David.
    "Why are you doing this David?"
    "Remember Sophie, yeah my ex, the person you tortured then killed?" You could see the anger on David's face.
    "You aske me to kill her!" All of a sudden David shoved Jane into the car and got in as well, he drove off and left Harry. Harry got into his car and tried to follow them, but he couldn't keep up and was losing them. So Harry gave up and went home to try again tomorrow.
    Harry managed to get a nights sleep thanks to seeing Jane's face. So he got up and made himself breakfast then got ready. He was driving to work when he saw a body in the water, Jane's body. So he slammed on the brakes and ran to see if she was still alive. He got to her, he turned her around and checked for breathing or a pulse, there wad nothing. Harry tried everything but it was no use she was dead, but there was a ticking noise, almost like a bomb.
     
  5. Oh my god ... Harry becomes the good guy ... The Jane dies and she has a bomb !!!!?!?!!?! Ahhhhhhhh
     
  6. I'm intrigued .... Gimme gimme gimme
     
  7. The police were called about a loud noise that was near a river, and there were 2 bodies there still reconizable, a male and female. Their bodies were taken for investigation, but the females body had to go for further investigation. They found a key in the males pocket, and his wallet. Inside his wallet was his driver liscence.
    "Harry Summer, it reads sir," said an investigator.
    "We shall take the key and find out what it is used for, in the time, try and found out who the female is," replied an officer.
    The police arrived at Harry's house, all the neighbours came out of their houses, hoping to see harry arrested. They all watched as around 20 police men walked into the house, 5 officers went into the shed.
    "SIR!!! I HAVE FOUND SOMETHING!!" screamed a young officer in the shed. All the neighbours were surrounded in the garden, wathcing every movement a police officer made.
    They climbed down the ladder, they saw skeletons and bodies everywhere, and now they knew what had happened to the other missing woman.
     
  8. Noooooo!!!! He's dead !!! Why did have to end like this ahhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Cruel world D;
     
  9. Hooray for short stories I read this in less than two minutes
     
  10.  Sarcasm 
     
  11. U sure josh.




















    Nope he was right






    Dry sarcasm