The Mercenaries

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Dittle (01), May 20, 2011.

  1. LOVE IT DITTLE 
     
  2. The man stopped and looked at Damrel, "Im not here to fight, in fact.. I want to recruit you."

    Yesha looked aggravated, "first.. Your name"

    The man smiled, "I am jack, and behind me is my comrade.. Danzo"

    Lictoral looked behind jack but saw noone. Suddenly the shadows seemed to move. A man dressed in black matched the background so perfect you couldn't even see him until he revealed himself with his movement.

    Dark eyes stared out behind a mask, "well?" danzo said in a quiet voice, "are you interested?"

    Satar took charge of this conversation, "I am Satar! And I wish to know what exactly are you recruiting for."

    Jacks smile never faded, "a rebellion."

    Conner spoke up from the corner, "rebellion?"

    Jack nodded, "danzo go check out that mans hand while I explain."
     
  3.  LOVE IT MUST HAVE MOAR NOW!!!!
     
  4. danzo pulled out a bandage from a hidden pocket and began to wrap up conners hand, "this should be good enough until you can get proper help."

    Jack turned his attention back to Satar, "across the sea their is the Talimar empire, and the province known as Balpo wishes to become an independent kingdom once again. See it was only captured by the galilee two years ago. So old generals of the Balpo kingdom are rallying troops and supplies to help in the war effort. I am a recruiter."
     
  5. Satar eyed the man, "sounds like a shit load of trouble..."

    Lictoral spoke up, "what's in it for us?"
     
  6.  MOAR PLEASE
     
  7. Jack looked at each person of the group with villigant eyes, studying every aspect.
    "honor.. Respect.. Experience.. And not to mention hordes of valuables."

    Lictoral gave a beaming smile, "what do you guys think?"

    Yesha looked uneasy, "that's an awful fatal chance we would have to take."

    Damrel shook his head , " we've taken bigger risks Yesha! We can do this!"

    Luke looked at Tal, then at the others, "tal and i were born to fight I suppose."

    Everyone looked up at Satar, the oldest member, and possibly the smartest.

    Damrel look impatient, "well, you big ass, what do you think!"

    Satar looked thoughtfully at jack, "respect.. Honor.. And money.. It's a good deal but we will face, spears, swords, death, and destruction.. I don't know if I'd go with it.."

    Satar twirled his axe on the table while he thought.
    Lictoral stopped the axe, "Satar, we are mercenaries. It's what we do, and this is exactly what all mercenaries want! Come on! We are all going.. We need you!"

    Satar sighed.
    Jack interrupted, "you do realize that women love fighting men in uniform?"

    Satar slapped the table, "DEAL!"
     
  8. LMAO "DEAL" 
     
  9. I wanna be awesome...
     
  10. High chances of that let me assure you :p

    And yes jack

    Recruiter ftw
     
  11. i love it!! 
     
  12. OMMMMFFGGGG

    You never told me you were so good at writing! D:

    This is amazing!

    I waannntttt mooaaarrrrr.

    Dittz, you just gave me the reason to come back to fanfic.
     
  13. Soon the group found themselves on a large boat filled with eager fighters, Conner had his hand all stitched up and joined the rest up on deck.

    The group talked o themselves.

    Satar looked at Conner, "this is your first war, jist stick close with the others, we don't want to get split up. Now occasionally commanding officers force us into different fronts. Therefore we must make due with who we have. And please guys, play nice. "

    Lictoral laughed, "shouldn't I be telling you that Satar?"

    Satar began to talk.. But he trailed off. .

    He nudged Lictoral, "look there boy."

    Satar gestured over to this dark haired women leaning on the ships railing. She too was clad in chainmail that stuck close and tight. It defiantly was made by a great blacksmith, but it was not the armor Satar was rating.

    Yesha shook her head at Satar, "come on guys let's go check out our bunks for the night"

    Yesha started off, Luke, Tal, and Damrel followed.

    Conner stood next to Satar, "think I can try her out?" he whispered.

    Satar quickly turned to Conner, "I'd usually say go for it son but this lady will destroy you. Just look at that feature of dominance on her face!"

    Lictoral turned to Satar, "dominant feature on her face?? You can't even see her face! She's facing the other way!"

    Satar slapped his hand on his face.. "well I suppose what I said could still be true!"

    Conner soon lost interest and spotted jack and danzo talking. He walked up to them. Suddenly WOOSH! He tripped over a box laid on the ground.

    Jack caught the young man, "gotta watch out for those bocksen, sonny"
    Conner would ask further about the bocksen but he was more interested in the ninja like danzo.

    Satar and Lictoral still were talking. Suddenly Satar started to the girl. He lean on the railing next to her.
    "pretty sea ain't it?"

    The women turned her head, she had a pretty face and profile, "I suppose. I'm not one for boats."

    Satar nodded, "then I suppose you aren't one for sea-men either."

    The women shook her head, "I don't prefer sea-men"

    Satar smiled trying not to laugh, "well that's good because I'm not a sea-man."
     
  14. Satar and Rose.. 
    ;D
     
  15. Ok now put me in
     
  16. Put both of us in... 
     
  17. Hold your horses Shelby, your coming up soon. Just let the plot roll out