The Mercenaries

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Dittle (01), May 20, 2011.

  1. I don't know if I am going to go on with this one, it's getting no feedback or views..

    :S
     
  2. It's up to you, ditz.. 

    It's still a great story, shame we can't read more if you quit it.

    On a happier note; I was a loyal reader! :D
     
  3. Suddenly there was a figure in the door. He steped into the light of the whore house. It was the man who gave the speech and as soon as eyes caught his image the place froze.

    "this is not the time for.. This." he said sharply while pointing at a half naked whore.

    "the talimar are up our asses and you all decide to go find asses for your selves. Pityful."
     
  4. Know how you feel. Nobody comments on my stories anymore. Btw I haven't seen danzo on in a while. Did he quit?
     
  5. Someone's maaaaad.
    More?

    And yeah danzo's on and off these days. :3
     
  6. Ah. Well keep it coming bro. You've got loyal readers in me and Jodie, and I'd hate to see the story that inspired me to write fanfic be discontinued
     
  7. I'll try getting some tomorrow
     
  8. Bumpity bumper cars
     
  9. Satar stood up and lictoral behind him and the two began yo walk out but the mustachiod man stopped them, "your mercenaries? Well. Your under my command I expect respect, now you two, rally the others and meet me and the rest of the fort back at The fort. We have talimar to deal with.
     
  10. MOAR<333


    Please :3
     
  11. ^^-what she said
     
  12. Next chance I get
     
  13. Bump. More!!!
     
  14. Well the thing is I don't have Internet for a while. Right now I'm using a libraries wifi.
     
  15. Oh ok. We will wait
     
  16. Thanks. Please bump my stories also :)