The Mercenaries

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Dittle (01), May 20, 2011.

  1. More!!!! Me dying with suspense!
     
  2. FFS Qin!!! I thought ur comment was an update 
     
  3. Commander Jack FTW! 
     
  4. Jack looked at the girl. She was tanned and had dark hair she wore a dark light leather outfit "Qin! Why are you back! Where's siz?"

    Qin rubbed her jaw, "siz sent me back early to warn you about a approach the Talimar are making!"

    Jack eyes widened, "how big?"

    Qin sighed, "it's a big advance.."

    "we weren't expecting a large attack anytime soon. They had to regroup their provinces and make sure noone else is revolting first don't they!?"

    Qin shook her head, "apparently not. Or they did it so quick we didn't have time to know."
     


  5. Must. Know. More. Nooowwwwwwwwww.
     
  6. MOAR BITCH MOAR
     
  7. M. O. R. E!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh and Dittle? I'm back in Massachusetts!!!!! :D
     
  8. I dont like this Qin character... seems suspicious...
     
  9. Will update tonight