The Mercenaries

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Dittle (01), May 20, 2011.

  1. This is great. 
     
  2. Interesting...
     
  3. Conner went for the dice, suddenly a knife came down through his hand. He screamed in pain as blood ran from the hand.
    A tanned man held the knife, " Damrel, Yesha, and of course Conner. I suppose you remember me."

    He yanked the knife out of conners hand which Conner quickly brought to his chest and tried to stop the bleeding. The man took out a long sword from a sheath he had on his side, he pointed it at Lictoral, "and I remember you too."
     
  4. O.O who's this hooligan?!
     
  5. this is so good, Hun!
    UPDATE!!!
    NOW!!
    Such Suspense used...
    amazing ... :)
     
  6. More Dittle! 
     
  7. The man swung at Lictoral who flugelhorn himself backwards, collapsing out of his chair, he unsheatjed his own blade.

    He stood up and pointed it at the man, "this fight seems uneven"

    Yesha unhooked a big mace she had clung to her back as Damrel drew his twin blades as Conner retreated to a corner to further nurse his hand.
     
  8. Ooh, interesting. 
     
  9.  utterly amazing
     
  10. The man snickered, as two ugly men walked to his side, "I'm sure you remember them as well."

    Lictoral nodded, "I suppose diplomacy is well past due then."

    The man smiled "it would appear so."

    The man thrusted his sword at Lictoral who leaped back and knocking the mans sword away with his own. Damrel jumped onto the table and dove at one of the men. His blades sinking deep into ugly mans torso. Blood trickled from the wounds. The man made small moaning noises as life slowly left his body.

    Damrel ripped his swords out. The man collapsed to the floor in a bloody, dead heap.

    Lictoral gave a nod of approval at the kill as he fended off the man who stabbed Conner.
     
  11. Woop!
    Go damrel 
     
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    Interesting...
     
  13. LOVE IT GIMMIE MOAR NOW!! b
     
  14. Ignore the b 
     
  15. Suddenly a giant hand landed a strike on the back of the other ugly mans head, the sound of bones snapping shot through the air. The man fell onto a near by table, the back of his head broken in, Tal stood in his place. A thick coating of blood enveloped his fist.

    The bar was emptied by now.

    Next to him stood luke and Satar.
    Luke pointed at the man who stabbed conner. Tal grabbed the man and held him tightly.


    Satar called to Lictoral, "can I finish the bastard off!"

    Lictoral shook his head and walked to the man, "looks like that contract was never finished. I like to finish things."

    Lictoral dropped his sword and pulled out his dagger.

    With one swift movement Lictoral heaved a breath then slashed the mans stomach open. His arm still spinning he leaped and quieted the screaming man by shoving the dagger in the mans head as Lictoral fell to his feet.

    Tal let go of the man. Who fell to the ground. Gushing blood from the top of his head and open stomach.
     
  16. Can I be in it and be an Elf?
     
  17. The blood on the scene looks real... 