The Mercenaries

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Dittle (01), May 20, 2011.

  1. I'm absolutely hooked on your story. It's great
     
  2. If this gonna continue i wanna be in it

    Arical
    13
    5'0
    Friendly
    Black hair and blue eyes
     
  3. You and everyone else arical 

    And thanks omitch
     
  4. No problem! Keep at it bro
     
  5. Its good... But needs mmore of me in it.....jk... ....

    Um....


    UPDATE! 
     
  6. The sounds of plates being passed around the table got nikkis stomach growling, she looked at Conner in a pleading fashion.
    "I'm hungry too," Conner replied seemingly reading her face.

    Satar grabbed his own stomach, "let's see If we can't grab some grub."

    Lictoral waved his hand, "I'm all set you Guys go."

    Luke shrugged, he laid his spear on his bed and him and the rest went to the dinning table. Excluding Lictoral.
     
  7. At the dining table a large crowd of soldiers and recruits from the battle crowded.
    Satar looked at the table, it was filled with a layout of food, "an after victory feast perhaps" he said to himself.

    He reached or a pitcher of drink. But so did someone else. He looked at the person.
    "Rose?"

    The dark haired women looked up at Satar, "Fancy bumping into you agian." she gave a small smile before picking up the pitcher and filling up a goblet.

    Nikki sat eyeing the food, undecisive on what to eat, "perhaps the chicken.. No... Duck... No... Chicken... Duck?"

    Damrel grabbed a drumstick and dropped it on her plate, "eat while you can nikki."

    Tal knew what he wanted, "everything."
    Luke held tap backfrom devouring the entire table while grabbing biscuits and chicken for himself.

    Conner downed a goblet in one gulp, "cider," he announced with pleasure as he filled up his glass agian.
    Yesha sat in the corner of the room, nibbling on a slice of bread. She was in a thoughtful mood.
     
  8. Lol no food for Tal!
     
  9.  MEE!!!!!! I love it ditz 
     
  10. Duck!
    Duck!
    Fuck!

    That's so Nikki :').
    Morepls 
     
  11. !

    I so didn't mean to write the last 'duck' part. 
     
  12. ... I hav never had duck...
     
  13. " Duck ! "
    " yea ducks have wings , No Duck !"
    Lol get it Its from Rio idk who either Blu or Jule but its hiharrious
     
  14. I think I found a way to put that character into my story finally .
     
  15. As the people at the table ate, Lictoral sat on his bed cleaning the blade of his sword. Suddenly the door creaked open.
     
  16. Oooo who is it?! 