The Mercenaries

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Dittle (01), May 20, 2011.

  1. Suddenly a gird came running up to jack, " sir, a small army of talimar are here.."

    Jack looked at the group, " looks like you guys get action before hand. Go out with the rest of the army. Me and danzo will lead."
    Jack and danzo ran off the group following.

    They stopped at the walls gatehouse. A army of soldiers waited, including the girl Satar met on the ship.
    Jack looked at one of the soldiers, "status!"

    The soldier looked at jack, "our archers on the walls thinned their lines, but they have a battering ram!"

    Suddenly as if on que The gates shook, a bang sounded and the gates shook agian. Jack took out his sword and everyone else did as well.
     
  2. Gaurd* not gird lol
     
  3.  LOVE IT!!! 
     
  4. Danzo yelled, "back away from the gates!"

    Suddenly the gate splintered into shards of wood. A few men up front got it in their face and ones even closer were knocked back by the force.

    Danzo took out his twin short swords and charged, the army followed.

    Soon the two armies clashed just outside the gate house.

    The Talimar soldiers wore a crimson banner as the Balpo wore their blue. Satar looked around, arrows filled the skies, blood soaked te dirt, bodies were littered everywhere.
    This was war.

    A talimar charged Satar, who quickly heaved his axe into a swing, cutting the man in half. He turned to the rest of te group, he tossed the talimars sword at nikki, "now you got a weapon."

    Then Sarar rushed into the fray after jack, the group following behind.
     
  5. Nikki has a sword?! 

    Kidding, this is great :)
     
  6. Love it 
     
  7. Sounds like The Witcher 2, it's a game, sounds very similar, it's epic
     
  8. THIS IS SPARTA!!!!!!


    MORE
     
  9. Dude this is a great story. Please continue to write it. I've enjoyed it so far
     
  10. Moremoremoremoremoremoremore

    D:

    Moremoremoremoremoremoremore


    Oh that was your girl?
    I thought I recognized her.
     
  11. It's original fletch.

    And I don't understand sizzles post. 0.o
     
  12. Part one of my post (moremoremore) is me wanting you to update the story.

    Part two of my post (oh that was your girl? I thought I recognized her) are lyrics to the song "Bedrock". Which I was listening to at the time 
     
  13. Satar swing his axe, wedging it into the gut of a talimar, he tore it out with another swing, which connected and hacked a talimar to his left.

    Lictoral parried an attempted stab to his face and knocked his opponents sword out of his hands and finished him off with a lunge through the heart.
    A Orcish talimar rushed Lictoral from behind, Yesha leaped into it's path and with her mace, dispatched the Orc with a crushing blow to the temple.

    The engineer in charge of the battering ram drew a sword at danzo, and swung, Danzo ducked and stuck his short swords into the mans stomach, ripped them out and then stuck them into his chest, and ripped them out again all in one fluid and quick movement, the engineer collapsed, dead.

    Luke impaled a talimar on his spear, a talimar approached him from behind. Luke jutted the butt of his spear backwards hitting the man in the face, breaking the mans nose in a swirl of blood. Luke then brought his spear around smacking the man across the temple with the side of the shaft then finished the man with a stab through the heart. Tal picked up a talimar and threw him into another. Soon three talimars targeted him. Tal unhooked a maul that was strapped to his back, and with one fatal swing, killed all three.

    Nikki stayed on the outer border of the fray with Conner. Conner who was handed a bow, notched an arrow and let loose. The arrow zipped through the air and found home in the skull of a talimar, after ripping through the talimars helmet. Nikki stabbed the man approaching Conner.

    More arrows continued to be fired from atop the walls. The talimar forces started to dwindle extremely.
     
  14. Jack hacked the head off the other engineer then useing a torch, lit the ram aflame.
     
  15. Did i kill the man...? 