The Mafia Story

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -Jon-, Sep 19, 2011.

  1. Antoine Marie
    Hi, I'm Antoine Marie. Call me Marie, I was raised on Spain and moved here to America when i was 16. I was recruited into the Mafia after I killed 3 men. Then I left the Mob. Now to present. I was sittin around watchin TV, allow of a sudeen the phone rang. I went and picked it up, it was Barbaro.
    "I need your help" He said.
    "How much Henry? You know I don't like working. I want atleast 2k."
    "2k it is, I need you to go down to the bay and blow shit up, go by Joe's gunshop, he'll have a Tommy waiting for you. Ok?"
    "K ill come cya once I get the job finished"
    Things were about to go BOOM!!!
     
  2. Is it still good? It sounds bad to me personally... I could use some feedback
     
  3. ii like it zero its interesting 

    always
    Fancy_Mia