The Mafia Story

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -Jon-, Sep 19, 2011.

  1. Marco
    I'm drivin' to Joe's gun shop. Need to get a new pistol and silencer, you know I need to make this clean. I pull up. And walk in.

    "Hey Marco" Joe says

    "Hey Joe, give me the magnum with a silencer"

    "Mob Job?"

    "Ya, it should be easy, its my first real job"

    "Wish I could join a family, it must feel great to get paid so often."

    "Ya it's also great when you almost get killed huh?"

    "ya ya but it pays, well heres your goods, I included ammo. Your total is $124.35. Good luck, brother"

    "Thanks, I'll try Joe"

    I payed and walked ou the door and sat down in the car. Attached the silencer and put a clip into the bad boy. Threw it in the passenger seat and drove my Packard Clipper to the docks. I parked my car infront of the office. The clock read 9:15 PM. Then out of no where i saw a group of men entering the building, they too were armed with pistols and one was carrying a shotgun. I cock my magnum. Open the das and take out my revolver. Load up the ammo and open the door of the car.

    "Here we go..."
     
  2.  I is in an alley watching you.


    Awesome updating! :3
     
  3. Thanks but the last two werent as good i think
     
  4. more zero next part 

    always
    Fancy_Mia
     
  5. Leo and marco meet?! Yes please!!!
     
  6. Zero that was awsome lol. You should wright a book!
     
  7. Leonardo "skull"
    We drove to the office building. According to the intel I got from 'em mobsters is that there are 5 crates in the office. We park up to office and get out. I brought along my closest friends, we had all out pistols in the back and a two shotguns. We took all the pistols and loaded them up, Me and my friend Darian got our shotguns and loaded 'em. We started walkin' stealthly ofcourse. Then all of a sudden a car pulled up, then after a pause the door opened. I aimed and oredered a hold fire. Then all of a sudden a shot was shot. The bullet met its mark sadly, Darian died. I shot and shot and shot, the car was totaled. I doubted anyone was alive. Then there was a shot. Let the fight begin, come at me you bastard.
     
  8. I like it a lot zero. 
     
  9. I don't have too many readers 
     
  10. Lol thanks julie how is it so far?
     
  11. im reading!!!!!!!! keeep going 

    always
    Fancy_Mia

    a loyal fan of zero's 
     
  12. Marco

    I opened the door and shot, i think one of their men got killed cause they open fired. I jumped and rolled, luckly they didnt notice. The car got totaled, it was a fuckin' one too. Anyway, once the shooting stopped I popped up and shot one of their guys, killin him, and shot another. I'm not sure if the bullet met its mark. That's when thr mayhem started.

    I crawled behind a diffrent crate as the previous was shattered by a shotgun shell. I popped out and sprayed a round with the magnum. I think I took two. That ment there was two left. They started falling back, they must've thought there were a couple guys. As they were running against the night sea breeze, i got up, aimed down the iron sights and fired twice. The shots, flares in the night, met one man. He crumpled and fell into the salty water.

    "Fish food" I said to myself, as the salty wind whipped my face.

    The other man got away, well I better go in and get the goods.
     
  13. awesome zero  hi 5  ii like it gooo get the goods mob buddy lol

    always
    Fancy_Mia 
     
  14. :3 does Antoine kick ass too?