the long war

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Joseph_Beccue (01), Nov 5, 2012.

  1. Soon there are so many guns going off that I have to yell orders as loud as I can. Then the s%&$ hits the fan. The enemy brings in 5 tanks to flush us out.

    Fox is the first to notice the tanks. She runs to me and I instantly see how scared she is.
     
  2. The leg?! Oh god, I would so something like that.
     
  3. (Lol sorry renegade. Something bad had to happen to someone)

    "Fox whats wrong? You look terrified"

    "I am terrified. There are five enemy tanks about to blast us to smitherins."

    "Oh crap that is bad. Skywalk did you guys bring any anti tank weapons?"

    Skywalk looks outside then yells "Simmons and Wrecker front and center. We got five tanks. Take them out."

    Two soldiers I assume our Simmons and Wrecker grab all their
     
  4. Rocket launchers and run up to a position where they can fire their rockets.
     
  5. That's alright.
     
  6. The enemy tanks start firing at us. Our group of 129 men and women fighting for their lives. Simmons fires his first rocket and lands a direct hit on a enemy tank. But before he can fire another round a lucky sniper takes his life.

    Renegade runs towards Simmons (with a limp from the hit to the leg) checks his pulse and confirms him dead. Two airborne troops taking him down to the wounded troop area of the farmhouse. While all this is happening Pvt. Nicks grabs a rocket launcher and takes out another enemy tank.

    Kinzie slaps him on the back just enough that it saves his life. But wounds her. The bullet from the enemy sniper
     
  7. Take out the **** sniper!
     
  8. Misses his head and hits Kinzie in the shoulder. Nicks then grabs another rocket launcher and fires at the snipers position. Ending that snipers life. Then Wrecker fires his rocket and hits a enemy tank as well. Now the enemy is down to 2 tanks. Renegade grabs Kinzie and takes her downstairs as Nicks helps. Fox looks at me and says "Joe we just might win this battle."

    I nod and agree. Then respond "I think Nicks is starting to like Kinzie.
     
  9. Next update tomorrow at 9:30 AM central time.
     
  10. Fox laughs and says "Well it would be good for Kinzie. Though a little soon."

    Then Wrecker takes out another tank. Soon the airborne troops setup there three machine guns and open fire. Enemy soldiers start going down like crazy. Fox and me start firing our weapons as well.

    Soon it seems as if we will win this battle. Then all that changes as th enemy brings 10 attack helicopters in. Wrecker yells "We don't have enough rockets to kill those."

    I look around and see a .50 Cal sitting on the ground. I grab it and aim at the tail rotor. I fire the rifle and wait. Then I see the helicopter start pitching and turning then it goes down in a fiery blaze. Killing its all men inside and crush 10 more on the ground.

    (Next update in 5 hours. So that's 2:30 central time. Be patient and enjoy this update. Also this story will be ending at 4:30 pm tomorrow.)
     
  11. (As promised heres the next update) soon I've done the same thing to 3 other helicopters. Wrecker takes out the last tank. Then starts firing his last 4 rockets at the enemy helicopters hitting and destroying 3 missing 1.

    Fox looks at and says "You have to take out the last 3 helicopters. "

    Im about to respond when suddenly rockets come out of nowhere and hit the last three enemy helicopters. The source is soon known by all. A American F-22 Raptor fighter jet has joined the party.

    All around me men start cheering and firing their weapons into the enemy lines. After awhile though the jet leaves. But only after providing us with more cover outside the farmhouse.

    I look at Fox and say " I'm going out there to bring the fight to them. "

    "And I'm coming with you."

    "I knew you would say that."

    Soon me, Fox and 15 airborne troops start expanding our controlled area.
     
  12. Bump. Can't wait to see how it ends.
     
  13. Next update at 9:30
     
  14. While taking cover behind a downed helicopter I find out via radio that the enemy base camp is 2 miles away. I look at Fox and say "lets take it over. We capture their commander and we can end this battle before we lose any more men."

    Fox looks at "I agree. But we will need more then 15 people to take that base."

    " I agree. We will need at least 30 men."

    Thats when Nicks and 14 more soldiers come running out to us. Nicks says"Kinzie is fine. Renegade has called in an evac also. They'll be here in 30 minutes."

    "Ok that means we have 13 minutes to get to that base, and 10 to capture it and make their commander surrender. Along with all his men."
     
  15. Just wanted to tell my readers that today I turn 20.
     
  16. Fox and Nicks both agree. Then we start running towards the enemy base location. Its takes us 12:30 minutes to get their base. Though we lost 3 men on the way there. Now were down the 27 men. I look at the enemy base and see that its empty except for the commander.and control center.
     
  17. I look at Fox "you take ten men and come in from behind. Nicks you see those medical facility take it. Take those seven with you. I'll lead the rest towards the front of the command center."

    Fox and her men go up behind the enemy command center. And Nicks goes and destroys the medical center. I come up the front of the command center. I walk in and say "Hello boys."

    The enemy commanders number about 13 men. The go to run out the back entrance but Fox is there. She says "so y'all gonna surrender."

    The general of the enemy commanders looks at us and says " I applaud your tactics. How many of your men did my glorious army kill.


    "1 to many commander. But now its time for you to admit defeat."

    "Yes it is. I will say you put up a great defense. But now I surrender. Captain give the order for all troops to surrender."

    The enemy Captain says "yes sir. *goes to radio and says * all troops surrender to the Americans. They have captured base camp."

    "Thank you General for surrendering before anyone else dies. Well all but one."

    "What you mean all but one."

    "I mean one of you must die for what you've done" I shoot the General in the head. "Thats for Lt. Sharp, Sgt Nickels, Sgt Ceña, and Pvt. Johnston. "
     
  18. Last update to this story in 6 hours. Also the sequel to this story will start tomorrow.