I like it. Great storyline from what I've read so far. My only criticism would be watch your grammar. Oh and proofread proofread proofread!
UPDATE it's short Ik but it's intense ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I push him away. "What the FUCK are you doing!!!" "Well isn't it obvious, I'm kissing you" He smirks and leans in again. I put my hand on his chest and shove him away. "NO!" "Aww come on babe. You know you want to." He leans closer squishing me against the door. "GET OFF ME!" I push him away as his hands begin to climb up my shirt. Quickly I unbuckle and open the door. Within seconds I'm out the door and running. I hear an engine start and I know he's coming after me. All I can do is run. I run down the road looking behind me. I see his headlights catching up quickly. I turn down and alley and stop. I'm trapped. One end is a brick wall, on the other is Codey's car blocking my exit. I back up slowly as he gets out of the car. "Looks like you've got no where to run." Codey smirks. "You're mine now" He stalks towards me as I look for something to hide behind. I dive behind a dumpster when a hand grabs my hair and yanks me back. "I'm not done with you yet, b*tch." He growled.
UPDATE short bc I did a double update ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "What do you want from me!" I was trying to get him to let go of my hair. "Well, you seem to be a little ungrateful about what we've done to help you. So I've been instructed to teach you a lesson." He explained as he threw me on the ground. "WHAT ARE YOU TALKING BOUT," Tears were streaming down my face as I searched for my bag. If I could just reach it. I looked up at him and started scooting backwards. "Well it seems to James that your an ungrateful bitch. He's tired of you not appreciating what he's done for you. He's made you desirable and yet you completely ignore him," He now has me pinned against the brick wall. "So I'm to make you learn your lesson." At that he stopped talking and started ripping my shirt. I squirmed and struggled trying to get away. "Lay still!" Codey slapped me across the face snapping my head to the right. That's when I see it..my escaped..just inches away from my hand if I could just.. "LOOK AT ME YOU BITCH" Codey had completely destroyed my shirt by now. I looked at him quickly and stretched my hand just a little....there. Cold, hard, metal connected with my hand. I looked up at Codey but he was busy with his pants. Now was my chance. I wrapped my hand round the gun and lifted it, and pulled the trigger.