THE LONER

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by WitchMother, Jul 19, 2012.

  1. Don't worry bout it
     
  2. Sorry it's been so long I lost my ipod
     
  3. I'll update tonight
     
  4. James was the bad boy of our school. Completely hot but absolutely mysterious. No one knew a thing about him.

    "Hop on," James patted behind him.
    I got on still shocked e even knew my name. James took off and I held on tight. He rode all the way to a park outside of town before he stopped and shut off the bike.

    "Um wat are we doing here?" I asked extremely nervous.

    James got off and turned to me. "Have u ever heard of the Spinners?" He asked raising an eyebrow.

    "Ya. They are the most feared gang and drug dealers in town. Why?" I questioned.

    "Because I'm the leader." James replied as he smirked.
     
  5. There's ur update :)
     
  6. ANOTHER UPDATE
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    I stepped back in shock. "No your not! If you were then you would be the most fear guy in town but hardly anyone knows anything about!" Staring at him in disbelief.

    "Jessy, I am. No one knows anything about because I keep it that way." He grinned devilishly.

    "Well um let's say I did believe you. Why are you telling me this?"

    "Well, Jessy, I've seen how people treat you at school and it reminded me of myself. See I used to be a loner like you. People made fun of my nonsocial personality. It pissed me off." He stated as he slammed his fist on his bike. "So I decided to just get rid of it all. I did the drugs,drank the booze and eventually started selling. And well some people started to look up to me and it have me the idea for the gang. But hey look at me now! All girls love me all. All guys wanna be me. But none of them know crap about me. That could be you. Those girls looking at you in awe instead of disgust. What do you say? You in?" He asked as he held out his hand.
     
  7. See its not a high school romance
     
  8. :3 Where's the gory stuff?
     
  9. Ok I haven't updated in a long time bc I'm having writers block so I came up with a couple ideas one if y'all could read this and wall or pm me ideas or I collaborate with some peeps. I kinda like the latter sooo tell me what u guys thinks best.
     
  10. Bump!! It's ok take your time
     
  11. Ok so this like just hit me ik it's long but I was so excited hope u like
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    I looked at his hand and then at his face. "No." Thats all I said, but he got pissed

    "No? No? I'm the only guy in this school who offers you any resemblance of friendship and you say no?" James spit on the ground.

    I backed away in fear. "No, James it's not that. It's just that how do I know your not pulling a joke on me? I'm sorry but I have to go." I turned to leave when he grabbed my arm.

    "If anyone finds out your dead you hear?" He let go, got on his bike and rode away. I watched in awe.

    I walked all the way home, said hi to mom and went to bed without supper. That night I dreamed of all the girls kissing up to me because I was with James.

    The next morning I woke up and got dressed. I grabbed my jean jacket and my bag and headed downstairs.
    As I walked outside I remembered my car was at the school so I started to walk. Along the way a car full of girls drove by throwing cans at me and yelling things like loser and outcast.

    When I finally got to school I let out a sigh of relief. I was at my locker when
    Taylor walked up. She slammed my door shut. Luckily I had already moved my hand.

    "Oops, sorry your just so invisible I didn't see you." She covered her mouth and started giggling. As she walked across the hall to her little group I spotted James. That's when I made my decision.

    I walked up to James and looked up at him.
    "What do you want?"
    You could tell he was pissed. I looked him in the eye and said, "I'm in."

    What he did next suprised me. He smirked grabbed my arms picked me up and kissed me. You could hear Taylor, Tiffany, and Tiana gasp from a mile away.
     
  12. I like it! Bump! 
     
  13. Thanks guys I'm kinda sick right now so when I get better ill update
     
  14. No. You will update now and you will like it.
     
  15. take your time and I hope you feel better!! 
     
  16. Haha lol Percy  glad u liked it
     
  17.  bump bumpity bump