(tarru and Angi and all my other readers, chapter 5 is now up in my story and chapter 6 shall be up shortly and maybe I'll even update another chapter today )
Kristen's POV ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ We were halfway across the parking lot when I heard the gunshot. I couldn't stop the tears that were streaming down my face. Jessy's dead. I just knew it. I felt it in my heart. I could tell by the look that she gave me, she wasn't planning on making it out. My sister and I may not be alike, but she would always protect me no matter what. I followed James to the car and put May in. James got into the car and drove away. I took one look back at the hotel before closing my eyes and falling asleep. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 3 WEEKS LATER It's been three weeks since Jessy's death. No one has seen or heard of Codey since that night. Lexi has disappeared to. May, who normally is very talkative, refuses to speak. Sky came home about a week ago, relieved from duty so that he could care for May. Mom and Dad act as if nothing has happened. As I'd their daughter never died. They didn't even go to the funeral. James is constantly over, checking on me. I am very grateful that I have someone who I can talk to. I was in the bathroom putting my hair into a complicated braid. Unlike my sister, I wasn't invisible at school. I tried to keep up my appearance. Though I have cut myself almost completly off, I still try and maintain a good reputation. "KRISTEN! JAMES IS HERE TO PICK YOU UP!" I heard my mother call from the kitchen. James had sold his motorcycle for an old pick-up. He's been picking me up and taking me home from school of late. I grabbed my backpack and headed downstairs. Taking a deep breath, I opened the front door, muttering to myself,"You can get through this. Just one day at a Time."
Too complicated... I understand it,it's frickin amazing but it just lost its shine when she died,it got slightly out of proportion... but it's AMAZING!!!