I hate it when authors say 'if I get this many bumps or good comments I'll continue'. You shouldn't write for attention. :/ And btw. You shouldn't bypass. It'll get you silenced, and even banned. :>
UPDATE ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Hey Natile." Drake said as he handed me my stuff. "Um my names not Natile. It's Jessy." I grab my stuff and bolt out of there. God how can I be so stupid someone like that knowing who I was? Thats so not happening. I start walking towards my car for lunch when I hear a loud engine. I looked to my right and saw him on his bike. The perfect rebel yet the perfect guy. James. No one knew his last name he was so hot and I have had a crush on him since I first saw him. James stopped in front of me and took off his helmet. "Hey Jessy, wanna ride?" he asked as he patted the seat behind him. All I could do was nod.
I'll update soon guys I love where it's going but if I don't it's cause I'm at worlds of fun or oceans of fun