THE LONER

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by WitchMother, Jul 19, 2012.

  1. OMIGOD this is so freakin good. I'm gonna die if you don't update it soooon 

    ཉᏌཀᎮ ཉᏌཀᎮ ཉᏌཀᎮ ཉᏌཀᎮ ཉᏌཀᎮ ཉᏌཀᎮ ཉᏌཀᎮ ཉᏌཀᎮ ཉᏌཀᎮ ཉᏌཀᎮ ཉᏌཀᎮ ཉᏌཀᎮ ཉᏌཀᎮ ཉᏌཀᎮ ཉᏌཀᎮ ཉᏌཀᎮ

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  2. UPDATE
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    "Well, well, well. Look who decided to show up. James, how you been? Mother treating you alright? Hmm?" Codey walked closer, spinning the blade like the cocky little butt he was.

    "Codey, I don't want to hurt you. I'm just gunna take Jessy and leave. We can forget this whole thing happened. We can go our separate ways." James stepped in front of me, half hiding me from Codey while also pushing me closer to the door.

    I took the hint. Slowly, never taking my eyes off of Codey, I inched my hand to the door handle. As I was reaching for it, Codey wiggled his finger.

    "Tsk, Tsk, Tsk. One shouldn't leave before the show has begun." Codey reached into the bathroom and brought his arm back out. It took me a second to realize who it was he was holding.

    I gasped. Kristen, my baby sister, Kristen

    "Oh, so you know her do you?" Codey raised his eyebrows as he moved hair away from Kristen's trembling neck. "Such a sweet, precious, 14 year old girl. She's very feisty to wouldn't you say?"

    Codey had moved the knife to Kristen's neck, holding her captive with and arm behind her back and the knife pushed against her pale, white throat.

    "Let her go! She has nothing to do with this!" I moved in front of James. I couldn't let Codey harm Kristen, I just couldn't.
     
  3. I feel special! I'm in here
     
  4. Hope u feel special when u dig out the plans for her...
     
  5. ^ignore that ^.^
     
  6. Brother got my iPod and was being a dipshit
     
  7. Does that mean ur gonna kill me off of here? Figures..I just can't have friends.
     
  8. What plans? now I must know. Update
     
  9. Nope not killing u off
     
  10. Kitty just pm me..we needa talk
     
  11. Bump!! But kris is lucky she's a good person in it .-. When I'm in the popular girls following group
     
  12. .-. Lexi that's not u in there, that's the three bitches of my school I reality
     
  13. Update 

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    "Aww, but shes suck a pretty thing, I think I'll just keep her. Besides," He looked up at me with a sly smile and a twinkle in his eyes,"Even if I can't have her, I still got back up."

    With that he whistled and a dark figure entered the room. She walked out of the closet carrying a limp figure.

    I didn't even have time to look at the mans face before I recognised the face of who he was holding.

    My hands flew to my mouth. I couldn't utter a sound as she was lowered to the ground. Warm, salty, wet, silent tears streamed down my face.

    She wasn't moving, and I couldn't tell if she was even breathing. I fell to my knees onto the scratchy, red carpet and wept. I couldn't believe it. In my mind she was dead. But why? Why her!?

    Suddenly I got very angry. Ever so slowly I reached my hand into my purse. I looked up and saw that Codey had disgarded Kristen, who was no huddling in the corner frightened. Now was the perfect time.

    I stood up ever so slowly. I turned and aimed the gun directly towards the person who I was sure killed her. Had killed May, my 6 year old niece. The only person who I truly cared for.

    I looked the killer in the face and gasped, dropping the gun in the process.

    No, No it can't be! It's impossible! It's...it's...it's Lexi
     
  14. I knew it would be lexi!
     
  15. Shes that type on girl 
     
  16. OMG! AMAZING! BUMP! 0.0 ... I'm kinda worried if I'm going to be put in.
     
  17. 0.0 oh u r Emma u r