The Lie and Love does not last forever

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by SolinCarter, May 19, 2012.

  1. -Next Year-
    Maximillian Gabriel Castro's Pov
    I've never seen Aaron like this before, maybe it's because he found someone
    that actually loves him. I wish I had found someone like that I think when I see Eugene walk up to me. We talks a bit then it's time to go to English class, not particularly my strongest subject.
     
  2. ~Dean~
    I look at Solin, she looks like an angel to me. I'm happy that found a girl that I love and will never let go of. I smile at her and said, "Solin, never let go, promise me"
    She smiles back and said, "I won't Dean."
     
  3. ~Solin~
    I look at Dean and Smile. He looks at me and we exchange a smile. I run forward and Hug him. Dean hugs me back. I look at him and say, "Forever together, I will love you forever."
    Dean smiles and responds, "I don't dream of ever letting go of you Raven"
     
  4. -Dean- I look at Solin and smile. I start singing to Solin.
    how will I start tommorrow with our you here
    Whose heart will guide me
    When all the answers disappear
    Is it too late ?
    Are you too far gone to stay...
    This one's forever ?
    Should never have to go away.
    What will I Do ?
    You know I'm only half without you.
    How will I make it through ?
    If only tears cloud bring you back to me
    If only love could find a way
    What I would do,
    What I would give
    If you returned to me someday
    Somehow, someway
    If my tears could bring you back to me
    I'd cry you an ocean
    If you'd sail on home again
    Wings of emotion
    Will carry you.
    I know they can.
    Just light will guide you
    And your heart will chart the course
    Soon you'll be drifting..
    Into the arms of your true North
    Look in my eyes
    And you will see,
    a million tears have gone by.
    And still their not dry.
    If only tears could bring you back to me
    If only love could find a way..
    What I would do,
    What I would give
    If you returned to me...
    Someday...
    Somehow...
    Someway..
    If my tears could
    bring you back to me..
    I'd hold you close
    And shout the words, I
    only whispered before
    For one more chance,
    for one last dance
    There's nothing I would
    not give and more
    If only tears could
    bring you back to me
    If only love could
    find a way
    What I would do,
    What I would give
    If you returned to me..
    Someday..
    Somehow...
    Someway..
    If my tears could
    bring you back...
    To me.....
     
  5. *replace our with out
     
  6. Lol... Thins is getting better and better! I love it!
     
  7. It's good.


    Detail would be extremely helpful. Pictures help but also what the expressions were, description of scenery, and description of characters would help much more (that's what I think)
     
  8. -Solin-
    I look at Dean and Smile, "I'll love you forever, no matter what gets between us."
    Dean looked at me and smiled.
    I started to sing.
    Remember those walls I built ?
    Well baby they're tumbling down.
    And they didn't even put up a fight.
    They didn't even make a sound.
    I found A way to let you in.
    But I never really had a doubt
    Standing in the light of your halo.
    I got my angel now.
    It's like I've been awakened.
    Every rule I had you breaking.
    It's the risk that I'm taking.
    I ain't never gonna shut you out!
    Everywhere I'm looking now
    I'm surrounded by your embrace
    Baby I see your halo
    You know your my saving grace
    Your everything I need and more
    It's written all over your face
    Baby I feel your halo
    Pray it won't fade away
    I can feel your halo (Halo)
    I can see you halo (halo)
    I can feel your halo (halo)
    I can see your halo (halo)
    Hit me like a ray of sun
    Burning through my darkest night
    Your the only one that I want
    Think I'm addicted to your light
    Swore I'd never fall again
    But this don't even feel like falling.
    Gravity can't forget.
    To pull back to the ground again.
    Feels like I've been awakens
    Every rule I had you braken
    It's the risk that in taking
    I'm never gonna shut you out !
    Everywhere I'm looking now
    I'm surrounded by your embrace
    Baby I can see you halo
    You know your my saving grace
    Your everything I need and more.
    It's written all over your face
    Baby I can feel you halo
    Pray It don't fade away
    I can feel your halo (halo)
    I can see your halo (halo)
    I can feel your halo (halo)
    I can see your halo (halo)
    Halo !
    Halo-ooh-ohh-ooh-ooh-
    Everywhere I'm looking now I'm surrounded by your embrace
    Baby I can see your halo
    Pray It don't fade away
    I can feel your halo (halo)
    I can see your halo (halo)
    I can feel your halo (halo)
    I can see your halo (halo)
    I can feel your halo (halo)
    I can see your halo (halo)
    I can feel your halo (halo)
    I can see your halo (halo)
     
  9. I'm trying to do as much detail as possible Cyber
     
  10. It's fine. I'm just giving you some feedback other than the lifeless (and now misused) bump
     
  11. -Janice-
    I look over at Jacob, knowing that we could never be together. I started singing,my voice soft and sweet, it hurt me more than in did him.

    I can take the rain on the roof of this empty house
    That don't bother me
    I can take a few tears now and then and just let em out
    I'm not afraid to cry every once in a while even though going on with you gone still upsets me
    There are days every now and again i pretend in okay but that's not what gets me
    What hurt the most
    Was being so close
    And having so much to say
    And watching you walk away
    Never knowing
    What could've been
    Not seeing that loving you Is what I was trying to do
    It's hard to deal with the pain of losing you every where I go but I'm doing it
    It's hard to force that smile when I see our old friends and I'm alone
    Still harder getting up
    Getting dress , living with this regret
    But I know if I could do it over
    I would trade,
    give away all the words that I saved in my heart that I left unspoken
    What hurts the most
    Was being so close and having so much to say watching you walk away never knowing what could've been
    Not seeing that loving you is what I was trying to do
    I'm not afraid to cry every once in a while even though going on with you gone still upsets me
    There are days every now and again I pretend I'm ok but that's not what gets me
    What hurts the most
    Was being so close
    And having so much to say
    Watching you walk away
    Never knowing what could've been
    Not seeing ever that loving you is what I was trying to do
    What hurts the most was being so close and having so much to say watching you walk away
    Never knowing what could've been
    Not seeing ever that loving you is what I was trying to do
     
  12. -Miranda-
    I walk through the corridors and catch up with Solin, who is walking beside Dean and Aaron. Lydia and the others are following us. I've liked College So far but I'm still trying to find someone who loves me for who I am. Things at home haven't been going on well, my brother has been at me asking if I'd found a boy friend yet. I was angry at my brother so I said no constantly.
     
  13. -Dean-
    Drama was late starting but Mara still sat with me and Solin. I look at Solin and she looks back, our eyes full of love. I look at Mara and smile, she smiles back. Solin looks at me, "Never letting go." I look back, "Why would I ever let go my love"
     
  14. -Graduation - Sophmore Year - Solin's Pov
    I walk over to Dean wearing a ruby red dress and a sapphire necklace, the sapphire ring and sapphire blue high heels. I couldn't wait to get my awards this year. I was so excited that I nearly couldn't stop talking about it for at least an hour.
     
  15. Dean, Miranda, and I walk up to accept our awards and then walk over and talk about it most of the time. Aaron and Elena accept their awards and follow us. My group and Aaron's group accept their awards all at once.
     
  16. -Next Year-
    Dean's Pov
    I walked through the doors knowing that in a year I would be gone from here. As I neared the gate I saw Solin, wearing the sapphire necklace and ring. She was also wearing a green dress. I knew that she was going to want to stay with me forever. Her words said it. Never let go. I thought, that's what we both said, I ment it and Solin must've ment it too.
     
  17. -Solin-
    I walk through the corridors going to all my classes in order, being here for two years I already know some other student, Angelica, Jessica, Derek, and a few others, whose names I haven't remembered. I still hang out with my group, infant now that I mention it, Ange hangs out with us at lunch now and so does Jessica. Derek and a few others I've gotten to know over the two years I've been here, hang out with Aaron's group now. I seems my life is complete. As the day finished I walk over to Dean and asked him, "Do you want to come over to my place after school like we used to do all the time ?"
    Angie and I became best friends as well, now I have her to rely on as well as Aaron. Dean looked at me and smiled, "Sure"
    Angie walked over to me, she smiled, "Hey Raven, can I come over too, then we can get dresses for prom later."
    I look at Angelica, and smile,I respond, " Sure Angie"
     
  18. Angelica's Pov
    I walked through many stores with Miranda, Jessica, and Solin and we got a few cute dresses for Prom. I was excited to go. I at least would have people to talk to since I moved here from Germany. I wanted to get to know as many people as I can before the year ends.
     
  19. -Prom-
    -Miranda's Pov-
    I walk in with my group. I'm wearing a blue dress with speakers on it, sleeveless. All the girls are wearing sleeveless dresses. Solin is wearing a white one, she looks outstanding, she has a sapphire ring and sapphire necklace, both from Rodriguez.