The last Piece sign ups

-I pull on my hoodie n run out the door- no -I keep running till I collapse in the middle of the road crying-

 

-his ears prick up at me. I set my other hand on his broad back and swing on-

 

-I stare at the water, memorized by the ripples. As I stare they start going backwards into the water-

 

-I bury my head in my hands- not again

 

-he's emotions flood over mine. Much simpler. I stroke his side humming softly as he wanders near the woods-

 

-I grab a stick and start drawing pictures like the water is sand, I hear a voice behind me-
What are you doing?

 

-I wipe the tears off my face-

 

-there's a figure in the woods coming at me-

Hia

 

-I turn around to see one of my new neighbors-
Nothing...
Liar!!

 

(im about to fa asleep. Can we hit pause or at least make sure nothing big happens til tomorrow evening?..).

 

-I walk through the woods my cloak making me practically invisible. My bow is drawn-

 

-I see a car coming but I don't move from my place in the road-

 

(ok)
-she steps closer-
"what's that on your shoulder? A tattoo?"
-I cover up my4 birthmark-
It's nothing...

 

( can we go a couple pages please?)

 

(can my mark be on my palm?)