The Lakehouse

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by _Rare-Secret-Beauty_, Jul 10, 2012.

  1. ~Old Lovers, New Memories~
    Charity: "So, are you going to be quiet all night or are you going to talk to me?"
    Jon: "Look, we are 17. I just wasn't wanting to experience one person, I want to live."
    Charity: -looking disappointed- "Yet you don't want to let others into your life?"

    ~Charity's POV~
    How could he treat me like that it's so selfish? I gave him everything and his reason is 'he wants to experience something new?' I pushed past him and up to my room, slamming the door behind me.

    ~Jon's POV~
    I knew she was mad at me, and I hope one day she takes me back. She is the girl I want to be with, but I just want to know what other girls are like. I was with Charity for 5 years. I needed a break. A new adventure. I strolled on into the kitchen to say hi to Aniket and Legolly. Before I could say hi I had been pinned to wall by my neck.

    ~In the Kitchen~
    Aniket had pinned Jon to the wall before anyone had time to blink. Legolly didn't even have a chance to hold her son back.

    Aniket: "If you so to look at her in the wrong way, you're dead."

    Legolly: -pulling my son by his arm- "Aniket stop it! Right now! This is uncalled for."

    Jon: -pushing Aniket's arm off me best I could scared to say anything- "I'm not gonna hurt her, I love her."

    Aniket: -pushing Jon back and pulling away- "Don't talk to me, you're nothing to us."

    Legolly: -helping Jon out of the kitchen, leaving Aniket to attend to the food- "He just needs his time. You did hurt his little sister and my daughter. We need to get used to you around here still."

    Charity: -walking down the stairs to see my mom talking to Jon- "What's going on? Why is his neck red? Where is Aniket?"

    Jon: -getting up and hugging Charity tightly- "I never meant to hurt you Char-Bear, I love you... Always. You know that right?"

    Legolly: -turns to the kitchen and sees Aniket watching Jon and Charity gripping tightly to the cutting knife and leaning forward, I step in front of him grabbing his wrist and telling him 'NO!'"

    Aniket: -drops the knife and walks to the basement shoving Jon away- "Bastard"
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    Update, tons of drama. Do you think Jon and Charity will get back together? Will Aniket keep his cool, and not kill Jon? We will see:)
     
  2. Nice update 
     
  3. I like how I'm portrayed 
     
  4. Back to page one
     
  5. Ok  I'll be updating later too
     
  6.  Zomg!


    Blump! :3
     
  7. Nieceawesome fanfic ouuhh Aniket sounds sucha hawtie for his age!!but yes UPDATE!!
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  8. I updated its your turn
     
  9.  I'm sad now
     
  10. Sorry i was busy today catching up with friends and then my family issues started again so sorry...
     
  11. ~Aniket's POV~
    My sister being so stubborn would fall for his lies again. Hell I'd let Dave my best friend hit on her before I allow Jon to win her back. Who does he think he is? Don't get me wrong if he makes my sister happy then I will just deal with it, but until anything becomes final I will be in the way... Always. I'm not stingy, I'm not selfish, nor am I jealous; its just my sister can do way better than him.

    ~Charity's POV~
    I hug Jon and slightly smile, I know he loves me. I understad why he left me, I knew he wasn't serious about this girl. However, what he did was still heartless and it did hurt me. I will have to try not to fall for his charms again, but with those big brown eyes I can't help but trip, and eventually fall.. Right into Jon's strong hold. I hold onto Jon's hand and lead him upstairs to get away from everyone, I sit on the edge of the bed and he sits on the floor beside my feet.

    ~In the Bedroom~
    Jon: "So I'm assuming you want to talk? Look I never meant to hurt you."

    Charity: "I know, but that doesnt change the fact that I did indeed get hurt."

    Jon: "Believe it or not I felt for you. It hurt me seeing you upset. Seeing you give up on everything."

    Charity: "I didn't give up, I simply couldn't continue. I am slowly getting back on track thought for your information."

    Jon: "Good I'm happy for you" -reaches out and holds onto her hand and stares into her eyes- "I didn't want to call her because she is just going to be temporary.. You are forever." -I lean in and give her a short loving kiss on her soft lips and pull away eyes closed-

    Charity: -speachless-
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    Short update for now. But gives you an idea as to where this could be headed. Hope you enjoy it:)
     
  12. Awww  keep up the good work and you may pass mine