The Lakehouse

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by _Rare-Secret-Beauty_, Jul 10, 2012.

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    This is Charity. If you are a character in my story you can post a picture for your character as well:)
     
  2. Don't wait on me love update at your choice
     
  3. Please update I updated
     
  4. ~The Next Day~
    Charity is sitting on the couch across from Lola and her brother, with Jon's head in her lap. Jon is still asleep and Lola is still not conscious. Saffire had already fixed Lola's arm in the middle of the night. Barely anyone was able to get anything to eat. Legolly had put away the leftovers, but you could still smell her deliscious cooking wafting through the air. Saffire had put a brace on Lola's arm and Aniket had held her hand through the night.

    ~Saffire's POV~
    Kyle is supposed to be heading over today to meet everyone, but I'm not sure if that is the best idea. I text him telling him that something is going on and we would have to do this another time. I watched over Lola to be sure her arm was healing properly. Sometimes the mind tricks don't always work out properly. This time though it seemed to be doing what it was intended to.

    ~Aniket's POV~
    I looked down to see a beautiful face, one that had split away from me a couple years back. I wish I would have just told her what I am. I wish we never broke apart. I wish I never hurt her like I did last night, and I hope she remembers none of it. If I could change the past I would have never chose to change.

    ~Charity's POV~
    I look up at my brother and see his face turn sorrow. He normally never shows his true emotions. He really is in love with this girl. I look down and see Jon his face has a bruise on it and a tear rolls off my cheek and onto his forehead. I catch myself crying and I wipe my eyes. As my tears falls onto him he starts to awake and look up at me. I didn't know what to do, my first thought was to look away. And so that's what I did.

    ~Jon's POV~
    I wake up and look around me, my head a little sore. I see Charity look away shameful. I pull her head towards me and kiss her lips softly pulling her into a hug.

    "What's wrong sweety"
    Charity: "Nothing, are you ok?"
    "I couldn't be any better"

    I pull her in a little tighter and kiss her cheek

    "I love you babe"

    ~Legolly's POV~
    I didn't know what to think of this situation my family has gotten into. The only thing I could keep thinking is if Lola and Jon would make a good addition, or not. As for them making my kids happy, I can't wait to call them my family. I'll do it myself if I have to. It might come sooner then I thought, or I hoped. I looked up to see Charity baring her fangs, but holding back. All while hugging Jon, and watching Aniket.
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    Please give me feedback. Not so sure about this update.
     
  5. Bump just keep at it love
     
  6. I dont even know if i should finish this story
     
  7. Who wants an update?
     
  8. Well I can't turn that one down:)
     
  9. ~Lola's POV~
    I flutter my eyes open to see the love of my life holding me tenderly. He leaned down and kissed my forehead. He was colder than I could remember. Like ice in a deep freezer. He pulled away and I began to sit up. I look over to see my arm wrapped in a thick bandage. I didn't know what happened, but my arm wasn't hurting. I look over to Jon and see him and Charity in a loving embrace. I couldn't help but smile. I guess this is how we agreed to split without a word. We both saw who we really loved and we both were in their arms and not in each others. It hurt a little to let him go, but I'm sure we will continue on as friends.

    ~Jon's POV~
    I glanced up at Lola, who had just started rising up from a deep sleep. I smile as Aniket kisses her, and for some reason I felt no jealousy. Maybe it was because I was now with Charity. Maybe it was because I am now with my true love. I look up at Charity who is staring off into the distance.

    "Char-Bear are you okay?"

    She didn't answer. She was avoiding eye contact.

    "Char, baby are you upset?"

    Again I got no answer back. I leaned up and hugged her putting her head into my neck. I felt a sudden painful pinch that penetrating through my skin. It began burning and then I felt light-headed. Then everything went black as I felt my blood rush out of me.

    ~Charity's POV~
    I did it. I didn't want to. What if it was too soon? Doesn't matter now because it is done. Pull away Charity. Pull away! I couldn't do it. He tasted sweet to me. I didn't want to stop. Before I could protest my mom was grabbing my neck rather hard. Instinctivly I let go. Into my arms Jon fell: limp, cold, immortal. He would never be Jon again. His life as we all knew it, is over and just begining at the same time.

    ~Legolly's POV~
    I watched as she began baring her fangs. My daughter the look of passion in her eyes as she stared, not at, but into Jon's neck. Before I could stop it her fangs were in his neck. Draining him. Draining him of his humanity, his life. I stopped her and looked up at Aniket who was begining to smell the blood leaking from Jon's neck. I slowed my thoughts for a moment and began talking to Aniket. Not aloud, but through our minds. He began calming down, but his grip on Lola got tighter.

    ~Aniket's POV~
    The blood smelt sweet. It was the smell only us as vampans would love. Jon was changing. For better, or for worse, no one could tell. But no one can stop it now. It is much to late for reconsidering what Charity had already done. All I could hear was my mom in my thoughts. My own voice disappearing.
    "Don't do it. Get up and go. Go somewhere far, far away. You will kill him. If not him than Lola. So run. Get away from here. Now!"
    I didn't want to leave Lola here in this house alone. I gripped onto her without thinking anything of it. She let out a soft squeal and looked up at Aunt Saffire.

    ~Saffire's POV~
    I watched my sister struggle to keep Aniket from doing any harm. I had to speak up, to do something.

    "Hey Lola dear, would you mind helping me in the kitchen."
    Lola: -looking down at her arm and up to Aniket- "Yea sure. Ani, do you mind letting me go."

    He let her go and we walked into the kitchen.

    "My current boyfriend is coming over soon. I need to cook something good but simple."
    Lola: "Summi Salad. It is deliscious, and good for you."
    "Well teach me how then."

    She began looking through the cupboards for ingrediants. I told her I had to use the restroom. I walked out of the kitchen and back into the living room. I saw Jon clutching Charity's hand firmly. He was holding in a scream. He was changing. Forever.
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  10. Ooooooo I'm immortal 