The Knights Order

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *black-crimson (01), May 6, 2012.

  1. Ben-determined look in my face reaches a broken dungeon-
     
  2. Is this the place...?
     
  3. Ben-dismounts-

    I hoped a nicer place too...

    -hold my hand out again-
     
  4. -Jumps down without the use of his hand-
     
  5. Ben-stops-

    Sam, have you been angry at me?
     
  6. No! Of course not! -Hint of spite and sarcasm in my voice-
     
  7. Ben-Sam....why are you angry...?
     
  8. -Doesn't answer and pulls the door to the dungeons back-
     
  9. Ben-sighs and walks inside the dungeon-

    Stay behind me...
     
  10. -Bites my tongue to stop me from exploding-
     
  11. Ben-walks in carefully and grabs a torch then grabs some flint and lights the torch, rats scurry away-
     
  12. -Follows him keeping my mouth clamped shut-
     
  13. Ben-lights the way and steps on something then a huge metal pole comes at our side-

    WATCH OUT!

    -pushes Sam but the pole catches my hand-

    AHH!
     
  14. -Falls hard against the stone wall- OUCH! -Close to exploding-
     
  15. Ben-holds my hand wincing but looks at Sam-

    Sam....are you ok....

    -still holding my hand in pain-
     
  16. -Punches a wall and storms out the dungeon-
     
  17. Ben-runs after her-

    Sam!
     
  18. -Leaps on the horse and gallops away-
     
  19. Ben-walks out and watches her gallop away-

    Sam.....

    -walks to the nearest city, my hand broken-
     
  20. -Suddenly passes out as I pass through the village that Ben is in-