The Knights Order

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *black-crimson (01), May 6, 2012.

  1. Ben-looks at him darkly-

    Betray? I never betrayed anyone! I was set up!! Besides i bet i dont even know your brother!
     
  2. Queen: -breath heavy as dhe keeps on couthing blood-
     
  3. Elizabet: ben, do you know our queen? Queen antonet. She war really from that kingdom of yours.
     
  4. Me:is she going to be ok doc?
    Doc:In a matter of hours
     
  5. You betrayed him you gave him false intel and his forces were decimated I still have the scar from the trickery you wrought -takes off his helmet revealing a scar over one eye-
     
  6. Queen: -she sweats coldly as she seems to frow the medesin out of her body. Even with her age she still looks like a child in pain- .....p-please stop...
     
  7. Elizabet: guys?,,,,,
     
  8. Me:I'm sorry we can't if you want to feel better
     
  9. Well Ben want to lie some more!
     
  10. Queen: -looked up as a scread looking child. Even in this pain she still look like a doll- this is no place to be sick in. My room is better...
     
  11. Elizabet: GUYS!!! Im srs!!
     
  12. Come on doc...-carries her to her room-
     
  13. -turns to look at her revealing just how bad the scar is-
     
  14. Elizabet: -is shock for a sec, but she knows she has some too- look at the sky,.!
     
  15. Queen: -breaths harder-
     
  16. -looks up- there's trouble I can sense it take him to the dungeon until I get back I'm going to defend the city!
    -runs off-
     
  17. -lays her down into her bed-
     
  18. -I see the doctor has a knife about to stave her but I kick the knife out of his hand and throw him out the window-
     
  19. Elizabet: go and chack the queen first. She is everything. Dont worry, ben are not going anywhere. -tays him up-

    Queen: -moans alittel as she gets layd down- ..... Doc.... May you...
     
  20. (never mind the last)

    Queen: h-huh?