The Knights Order

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *black-crimson (01), May 6, 2012.

  1. Caleb: it's fine *resumes cutting his remaining arm and sighs and says quietly* I've lost everything I hold dear
     
  2. -Sighs- I truly am sorry...
     
  3. Caleb: I lost you

    (notice how he doesn't say archery for he didn't hold that nearly as dearly as he did Sam)
     
  4. -Feels a yearning in my heart, a yearning for Caleb's love- I know... 
     
  5. Caleb: *drops the knife and mutters a spell and the wounds heal*
     
  6. Caleb: *says sadly* I can't bear to see you sad
     
  7. -Looks away again. Scared to look into his eyes-
     
  8. Queen: thank goodness - is still in pain-
     
  9. Caleb: are you alright queen *sounds depressed*

    (could the queen leave him and Sam alone?)
     
  10. -Helps the Queen up- Mother?
     
  11. (to move the plans forward for one post I shall be the queen)

    Queen: I'm alright Samantha *kisses her forehead* I have some business to attend to *walks out*
     
  12. -Watches her leave-

    (Please no one stop this because it has taken ages to plan)
     
  13. Caleb: *shuts the door then eyes turn red* why hello Samantha I think I shall please this body greatly *locks the door*
     
  14. -Eyes widen- No! -Screams and tries to unlock to door- Help me!
     
  15. -turns and looks at patience and growls- go **** yourself I'll release the sin when my brother is gone and dead for good until then I will not release it and you will not kill me because I posses the sin and it would just love to have me kill you but I have the power to keep it sealed you decide.
     
  16. Lust: let me out, Colin!

    Queen:-looks for drake- this cant be.. -feel her stomic- my gods...
     
  17. READ MY THREAD!!!!!
    HEXTRIC IT'S FRIGGEN AWESOME!!!

    (I need feedback)
     
  18. Diana: I look around for Sam "Princess? Where are you?"
     
  19. Caleb: ~unwilling time-skip~

    *eyes turn normal and he looks at himself and screams then falls off the bed*

    Patience: you are a sin yourself you do not deserve the life you live you can't kill your brother and you won't release your sin what you don't realize is that his sin is more powerful than yours so when you release yours you may conquer him for good triumphs against evil but his evil is stronger than yours