The Knights Order

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *black-crimson (01), May 6, 2012.

  1. (ofc you can)

    Queen: I-Im so sorry.. I must have stressed too much... -she looks more pale-
     
  2. Are you ok my queen?
     
  3. Ben-opens one eye chuckling-

    Love birds
     
  4. -pulls back- Ahhhh good you proved me right you weren't out now answer the question!
     
  5. Elizabet: -her eyes wides, but she gives in and kisses softly back-

    Queen: I.... Dont feel too well, am I afraid...-she starts to lose her consestnrs-
     
  6. (arg. Late again)
     
  7. Is there a disturbance? Have we lost some forces?
     
  8. Ben-smirks mischeviously-

    What is the magic word?
     
  9. (ouch also like I said epic foreshadowing in character description)
    Answer the question please Ben spy from a land that was destroyed by a powerful empire.
     
  10. Queen: ...... The ... Balence is about to break.... Oh no.... What have I done? .. Arg! - she choths up blood into her hand-
     
  11. Elizabet: that small kingdom? Wasent it destroyd by the Akaneserene?
     
  12. Ben-my eyes turn bitter and cold at what he just said-

    Thts a old boring story...
     
  13. Queen: .... Im sick..... Deadly sick....
     
  14. Ben-growls at what Elizabet just said-

    We Blarkanors were a peaceful little kingdom....until we were discovered...
     
  15. I'll go get the doctor...
     
  16. -the sky turns dramedicoly dark-
    Elizabet: -looks up- hm?
     
  17. Queen: hurry.....
     
  18. Ben tell the truth or I'll kill you for betraying my brother your lucky to be alive after that!
     
  19. -brings back the doctor-
    Me: doc if you need me I can help
    Doc: I'll need it pass the medicine....