The Kiss of Death

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Sophie_Whovian, Jun 15, 2012.

  1. Omg!!! What happened to julias grandma 
     
  2. OH SNAP!!! Bump. What happens?!?
     
  3.  BUMPY DOODLE BOP!
     
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    Update assoonasyoupossiblycanorIshalldie
     
  5. Bump bump bump bump bump bump bump bump
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  6. Great story! [color]
    UPDATE! [size]
     
  7. I stood up, my fists clenched. "Why are you here?"

    Julia stood next to me. "If you've hurt my grandmother, I swear to-"

    "Oh, looks like you've found them." Julia's grandmother appeared behind him. "Girls, Brick says you're friends from school."

    "You could say that," I said, glaring at him. Julia's grandmother went back downstairs and I heard Julia sigh with relief.

    "If you had done anything to hurt her-"

    "I wouldn't bother," Brian -er, Death, said. "I know the exact date when she will die. Bit pointless for me to kill her, really. "

    Julia gasped. "Why?"

    "Because tomorrow she will have a heart attack and die before the ambulance comes. Besides, I've only ever killed six people, your mothers and-"

    "The family from Kansas." I finished for him.

    "Yes," He acted surprised. "Well, I usually just come to collect, but I needed to get you two alone."

    Julia walked up to him. "That's why you're here."

    Death nodded. "I've come to collect you two."

    "Collect us?" I asked. "So, are you going to kill us?"

    "No, no, no," Death shook his head. "Like I said, you two are special. I'm not sure why, but I can tell I need you for something."

    "Well that's just great," I said sarcastically.

    Death grabbed Julia's hand and my hand. "We really must be going."

    "Going where?" Julia and I said in unison.

    Death smiled, and for the first time since I'd met him, it looked like a real one. "We're going home."
     
  8. Omg that's awesome!!!!!
     
  9. Noooo!!!!! Add more please!!!!!!!!!
     
  10. Bump!!!!!This is so amazing
     
  11. Wow, I really like this. Maybe just a little longer updates, and it would be perfect. 