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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by NeonQueen, Nov 27, 2011.
I know...I've liked you to -I let go of fox n slip into the water-
I'm fine -I watch bridget- Don't die...
Chris: brigit! *more tears slide down his cheek* please die fast() I don't want you to suffer
-I shake my head and swim down to lift her up- She's not dying on my watch
-I start to sink-
Chris: really?
(die fast...oh wow thanks)
( he's going into shock, the love of his life is dying right in front of him.)
(at least he's honest ) Alida: *Alone in her cave, scared, and unsure*
-I nod and dive under grabbing her ankles and pushing up-
-my vision is blurred-
Chris: *closes his eyes^
-I hold Bridget across my arms and tread water- I got her
-I cough up water-
For now. I can only do this for so long
Chris: I don't know what to do
-barley breathing-
Me either
Chris: we can't do this forever. And who knows when that lava will stop flowing and we can get out.
(just drown me if ya aren't gonna save me) -coughs up more water still barley able to breath-