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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Funnymouth (01), Mar 6, 2013.
Jack: -walking outside-
Akiko- ;Grabs a sandwich and follows them, cringing from the crowd of people in the living room. ;
Anni: -sits on the couch and watches Jenni play-
Jack: /
Jack: -whistles-
Akiko- ;Is bumped by a larger kid.; S-sorry... ;She sits down, rubbing her arm.;
Jack: almost forgot! -jogs back to his dorm-
Jenni: -finishes her banana and throws the peel in the hall and continues playing-
Akiko- ;Eats her sandwich, shrinking away from the people in the room.;
Jack: -turns into his room, setting his alarm-
Jenni: -wanders round singing- Lalalalalalalalalala
Anni: I'm gunna follow Jenni, or she's gunna get lost, see you later Akiko -follows Jenni-
Jack: -opens his door, stepping out-
Akiko- ;Holds Betsu tight, glancing around.; C-c-can we go now?
(scratch that.)
Akiko- ;Follows Anni, not wanting to be left alone among so many people.;
Jenni: -bumps into jack falling on her bum- Anni: -following Jenni at a distance-
Jack: -walks down the hall, passing the 3- thought I smelled you guys
;The loudspeaker blares.; Classes have been designated. All new students report to the library.
(scratch) Jack: hey watch I... -looks at jenni-